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tom117z


A Twilight Sparkle fanboy who also likes to write. The author of the Change series.

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Little Wing and Cirrus Ramble are two young ponies, originally from Cloudsdale but spending time nowadays in Ponyville. When a new Daring Do book comes out Little Wing is determined to collect it first from the library.

When Twilight is revealed to be out, they decide to sneak in and snoop around. They promptly find Twilight's secret lab behind some random bookcase. It also contains an evil looking death alter. It's about as stupid as it sounds.

Based on a True Story, as experienced by Tom117z and Skijarama in Legends of Equestria.

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Comments ( 19 )

(hasn't read this yet) Death Altar? Do you mean a sacrificial altar?

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No, we mean a death altar.

I laughed a fair deal with this.

May only to please the Latin translation from English to translate better! Come out, 'and this software does not give suck;

That is the actual translation according to Google Trasnslate.

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No, we mean a moon.

“WHAT!?” Little Wing blurted out, her eyes widened and her wings popping open in amar. She then sagged in defeat. “Aw ponyfeathers. That mare is really annoying.”

What is amar?

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It was supposed to be this:

Oh sun god, please make google translate better at translating things from english to latin! Come forth and make this software not suck!

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I think our point was proven.

Little Wing snorted. “Me and her? Sisters? What crazy universe are you thinking up?”

:facehoof: Gave me a good chuckle, I'll give you that

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Welp, clearly his prayer wasn't answered.

Also, read that as "death star"

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Indeed, the point was proven... I also got the same translation from google translate and felt that it was somehow incorrect, lol.

Also... I have no words to describe this story, I'm pretty sure the only reason I read it is because Tom wrote it... I was going to ask the inspiration to the foals' name... but you kind of explained that already. So I guess I'm just going to go now, and try to forget I ever read this ridiculous thing that somehow ended up in front of my eyes...

Aww, I was hoping she actually summoned them and they started to attack Equestria. :twilightsheepish:

I though she was just going to summon Celestia, and Sun-horse would be all like: ffs Twilight stop trying to summon ancient evil

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Well it is called the 'Idiocyverse' for a reason. :rainbowlaugh:

JMP

That was actually hilarious. I have no idea why, but it was great.

“Utinam soli Deo placere et ex anglicus Latinae translationis translate melius! Exite, et hoc software non lactaverunt!”

:rainbowlaugh: Nice touch.

Spike’s reaction is priceless.

Cirrus did not seem thrilled by that idea, not one bit. “‘Borrow’ it, eh? Okay, one, she’s not in there and that would definitely be stealing. Two, she’s one of the four ruling princesses of Equestria. Three, we could get in a lot of trouble. Four, she’s one of the four ruling princesses of Equestria! Five, it’s you concocting this operation. Failure is to be assumed.”

This may be my favorite break down of a retardly dumb idea ive ever read.

Oh, I know that Twilight's player.
What's funny, "other Twi" did exist

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