I'm liking where this is going so far, but you really need to put this through a spelling and grammar checker. It's rife with mistakes, a little bit of technical polish will do wonders.
Stāsts bija lieliski! Man patika rakstzīmju attīstība un tas, kā jūs pārvietojāt starp ainas! Jūsu apraksts padarīja mani laimīgu, un es ceru, ka tu labi! Pārliecinieties, ka mērci neietilpst veļas mazgāšanas laikā!
I'm liking where this is going so far, but you really need to put this through a spelling and grammar checker. It's rife with mistakes, a little bit of technical polish will do wonders.
So Starlight isn't going to get fattened up in this story? Aw, I'm disappointed. Still, looking forward to the next installment.
Great story I am really enjoying it I hope you can update ASAP because i can't wait for the next chapter
Stāsts bija lieliski! Man patika rakstzīmju attīstība un tas, kā jūs pārvietojāt starp ainas! Jūsu apraksts padarīja mani laimīgu, un es ceru, ka tu labi! Pārliecinieties, ka mērci neietilpst veļas mazgāšanas laikā!