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It got a lot of downvotes so I removed it, but that's probably unfair of me. Still, please vote it up if you like it, I dislike thinking I have such an unpopular story.
This was a pretty cute idea. I do have a love for sexytimes that result from miscommunication and misunderstandings.
As far as the overextended metaphors... Sometimes (most of the time actually) I think I prefer those over blunt descriptions of sex. It’s just a hard tightrope to walk, to write that scene without making it so ridiculous that it wrecks the reader’s immersion.
Have you read Rock Farms Have Terrible Sex Ed or Proofreading Clopfics Sucks (specifically Fluttershy’s chapter)? Both strike me as relevant.
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Relevant indeed! I really like the end of the first chapter in the Rock Farm fic, and definitely feel an affinity toward Fluttershy's style, even if it's a bit overdone in the fic. Thanks for linking them!