USMC Corporal Melissa Foster has been mysteriously stranded in Equestria. She is determined to survive in a world she once thought fiction, using her wits and training, along with the help of a certain group of locals and another castaway from Earth.
That explains the Q dream. Hopefully the ponies will actually think about the cruel truths he revealed and be prepared to make some amends. It's not the whole truth, but there's enough to it that they really should be doing some soul-searching about how Melissa was treated. Especially Fluttershy and Celestia. And I hope someone discusses what happened with Lyra and Bon Bon, letting them know they threw an innocent victim under the bus without even talking to her.
The similarities between Melissa and Sunset's behaviour does lead me to wonder though. Did Sunset also suffer from ADD or was she poorly socialized? I could see a feedback loop happening, as ponies react negatively to her social stumblings, she gets more and more impatient and unforgiving towards their reactions to her, until her poor behaviour towards others becomes the deliberate choice they originally mistook it for instead of the inadvertent social miscues and errors it started as. Just a thought.
Well, this has been an interesting read. The story runs quite smoothly but the setting of "Crossover of a fanfic" surely drives a lot of people off from starting to read it. This story could easily be made a lot more popular if it was stand-alone story with its own setting. There are a lot of references in here, and some enjoy it but to me it was a bit too much, but could be it just is how the character is, explaining things from perspective of random TV series or books. The story seemed a bit incoherent at times, things happened a bit jumpily but i count that as being due me not having read the Hands.
Anyway thank you for writing this, and do not be shy to write more things if the mood picks you!
That explains the Q dream. Hopefully the ponies will actually think about the cruel truths he revealed and be prepared to make some amends. It's not the whole truth, but there's enough to it that they really should be doing some soul-searching about how Melissa was treated. Especially Fluttershy and Celestia. And I hope someone discusses what happened with Lyra and Bon Bon, letting them know they threw an innocent victim under the bus without even talking to her.
The similarities between Melissa and Sunset's behaviour does lead me to wonder though. Did Sunset also suffer from ADD or was she poorly socialized? I could see a feedback loop happening, as ponies react negatively to her social stumblings, she gets more and more impatient and unforgiving towards their reactions to her, until her poor behaviour towards others becomes the deliberate choice they originally mistook it for instead of the inadvertent social miscues and errors it started as. Just a thought.
Well, this has been an interesting read. The story runs quite smoothly but the setting of "Crossover of a fanfic" surely drives a lot of people off from starting to read it. This story could easily be made a lot more popular if it was stand-alone story with its own setting. There are a lot of references in here, and some enjoy it but to me it was a bit too much, but could be it just is how the character is, explaining things from perspective of random TV series or books. The story seemed a bit incoherent at times, things happened a bit jumpily but i count that as being due me not having read the Hands.
Anyway thank you for writing this, and do not be shy to write more things if the mood picks you!
shit, this is amazing.
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