• Member Since 6th Apr, 2014
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Chocolate Pony


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Two powerful beings on opposite ends of the spectrum. One ruled her land with kindness and order. The other saught to rule the world with his cahos and wickedness. Natural enemies. From birth they were doomed to fight. To seek the others destruction. But were they always like this? No. They once enjoyed much simpler times. Times when war and hate were nothing but a bad dream. When youth and arrogance worked hoof in hoof. When young love, seemed as though it would last an eternity. These are the times the two have forgotten. Until now.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 21 )

This. This is adorable. Very nice.

Hm very interessting so far
Im excited for more ^^

8364009
Awesome sauce! Glad you like it!

God start.

Based on cover picture, Celetia forgot their romance before they became chess masters on the chessboard of the gods?

Is celestia living in her memories with her memories or not?

8365785
Pretty much. Her memory has become so clouded by the battles they used to have, she's forgotten who they used to be. And what used to be between them.

8365793
It's sort of off and on. But for the most part, yes.

me reading this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NKWpGJ4Xhw8
take your time, its look like a very good story

8660298
Aww, thanks so much! Will be updating soon!

"Celestia his her face behind her pink mane in order to avoid their eyes" I suppose that the "his" is for hide.
Anyway, omg celestia, living so long took a blow in her memories, and discord trying to cheer her up is the cutest thing ever <3

8667671
Yeah sorry, had to fix that. Just a typo.

And yes it did. But really who wouldn’t end up forgetting important details about personal matters when you’ve been alive for over a thousand years and have been through so much/have had to remember so many other important things? Celestia used to be a pony who felt and experienced a lot of things other ponies face on a daily basis. But that has all been consumed and replaced by her role as a princess. As will be further shown.

husband? o.o

[Jojo] To be continued...

8938958
Yep! Things are about to get interesting!

omg... that moment when discord face was serious and hurt... that was so sad.... more of this please

9353839
Oh trust me. They’ll be plenty where that came from.

Ouch
Very intense ending!!

So goood 😍

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