Finally got back to reading this again. A very good story so far and a little more Spitfire, too. Never expected to see the Smooze appear in this story, but it certainly felt like a much more real threat than whatever could have been presented in mlp. I'm usually pretty easy to please, but this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories.
30 July 2012:
Ponystar Celestia's first chapter broken into four pieces for easier reading.
Many additional edits applied.
Miniseries Night 2 still in work.
Nice work author : )
Very good. Definitely has the feel of the TV show.
Finally got back to reading this again. A very good story so far and a little more Spitfire, too. Never expected to see the Smooze appear in this story, but it certainly felt like a much more real threat than whatever could have been presented in mlp. I'm usually pretty easy to please, but this is quickly becoming one of my favorite stories.