Equestria is in disarray and it is up to the princess sisters, Luna and Celestia, to return the peace interrupted by an alien being. Confronting a foe such as this won't be easy, but just how much of a strain will it put on the alicorns' relationship?
(My own origin story idea. Each chapter will, hopefully, be released weekly. Feel free to comment on your likes and dislikes. Again, if you like the pic, give the artist your approval.)
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I thought it was going to be an...
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Epic Fail.
But, It looks like an...
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EPIC WIN!
How is it one? Well, it has suspense, well written, no grammar mistakes (Well basic ones.) only a few spelling errors. I think this could turn out to be very good!
I apologize for the lateness of this one. (
) Due to some technical difficulties (and my own stupidity) this got pushed back.
Now that it's out though feel free to comment as usual. The third chapter should be out by the 1st of August, hopefully, and I'm thinking a short epilogue might come into play. Enjoy!
Peace
Well I must admit, in writing and editing the third part, I decided that this section should stand alone. If I had added it to the third, that part would be too long for my taste. Consider this an interlude (and hopefully a good one).
Also, there have been a couple personal events going on that will affect the time I can finish the next part so the whole weekly thing is thrown off. At least they're positive events. I will do my best to finish this up as I've got another story mostly fleshed out (short, actiony one-shot) and hope to release that one in a few weeks (again with the 'hope').