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The Brony in Denial


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Twilight and the Main 6 defeated Nightmare Moon long ago using the Elements of Harmony, although she was defeated, she still settled within the mind of Luna, slowly fighting to get free. When that opportunity comes she no longer is out for revenge.

She is out for blood.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 15 )

inhuman

Ummm:rainbowderp:

Well anyways, I'm intrigued. Can't wait for more chapters

I just have to say thanks to everyone for the positive feedback, I'll be writing at full speed ahead and get chapter 2 out as soon as I can.
:pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Lex In Deus Lumpum deleted Feb 26th, 2013
Comment posted by Lex In Deus Lumpum deleted Feb 26th, 2013

I'll keep an eye on this, but rule of thumb: New speaker, New paragraph. Always.

@The albionocorn
Thanks, I was trying too hard to get this chapter out and pick up the series with longer chapters I may of forgotten to edit a few things.
:twilightsheepish:

Don't worry about it to much, just write at your own pace.

Stories are like muffins, if you take your time and are careful, the rewards are worth the effort.

I wouldn't blame you for writer block, the TRUE bane of fan fiction. It's just good to see you writing again.

@critfist
Thanks, its good ta be back, I have the first half of chapter 4 written out, and trust me. This is where the fun begins :pinkiehappy:

I want to thank everyone for the support since I started this project, chapter 5 will be a short one so it should be out in about a day or two if not today. Chapter four took a while due to sickness, school, and depression, but all is good now. :pinkiehappy:

emens you actually spelled it wrong you were trying for 'immense'. :twilightsmile:

Oh crap, thats what happens when you upload without spellchecking :facehoof:

Hmmmm i like how she has even more power i hope the fight with Celestia has alot of action in it.

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