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  • 102w, 5d
    Hiatus

    As any of the kind people who actually do continue to follow my silly little project may have noticed, I haven't updated in forever, and I'd just like to send out a big apology and explain why. In a word: uni. I've recently got back into full-time education recently and to put it simply, it's eating all my time and still demanding dessert. I honestly just don't have the hours to continue Of Harmony & Chaos, which, if I'm being honest again, I think I needed a break from. I set out to make a reasonably-sized fic from the start, I just never realised that it would ever get this big or take as long as it has and I now do believe quite firmly that I bit off just a tad more than I could chew when I started it.

    This is not all to say, however, that I'm giving up writing FiM fics, or Of Harmony & Chaos. I have resolved that I will finish it, but it's going to have to wait until I actually have the time to do so and that magic spark which had been fading away with the recent chapters is back. So, until then, I'd like to thank everyone who has taken the time to read this crazy creation of mind and to apologize once more!

    Brightwel out.

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Celestia, Nightmare Moon, Discord, the Elements of Harmony. All things that once clashed 1000 years ago. What happened in that ancient time, whose echoes can still be felt millennium later? Was it truly just jealousy that changed Luna into the cruel Nightmare Moon? How did a mad being like Discord become the ruler Equestria? Just what exactly are alicorns, and how did Celestia and Luna come to be? There are many answers the history books and the princesses have not mentioned, or have choose to keep secret...

First Published
4th Dec 2011
Last Modified
22nd Aug 2012

This is an extremely well written story, though there are several glaring grammar and spelling issues prevalent, I cannot recall any specific examples right now but the spelling errors seem to repeat themselves almost as often as the word itself appears

But other than that it is excellent and I will be tracking it hoping for more

wow, this story is amazing! Baby Luna is so adorable, but the Discord/Aumean-scene is great as well! You've written it very beautifully so far, can't wait to read more! =D

baby luna saying "cake" almost gave me a heart attack.:rainbowkiss:

Excellent

I love it! :pinkiehappy:

I love this story so far! Its such an original history of Celestia, Luna and Discord. I miss little Luna though :fluttercry:

Can't wait to read more

Thanks for all the positive feedback, I just hope I can continue to deliver!

And @Mänic, I'll try and root out those mistakes and correct them if I have the time. If anypony can quote them, I would certainly appreciate it.

Marvelous

It seems one-word comments are in this season. :derpytongue2: But I am much too verbose a person for things such as that. Have some more praise: 5/5; tracking; please keep it up, I can't wait for me.

Whoopsie... *can't wait for more*

ah, poor Viator, looks like he needs another lesson in love and tolerance :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Brilliant, normaly i'd leave some kind of review/witty comment (flame), but I'm too tired right now.

A few typos here and there (e.g., "se" see), but nothing a once over or two won't fix. On another note, the story continues on just as marvelously as the previous chapters. Please, keep it up. :pinkiehappy:

Very well thought out. Even without a story there is something to learn from your interpretation of Equestrian history. I hope you don't mind me incorporating bits of this into my own writing. :twilightsmile:

Very well thought out. Even without a story there is something to learn from your interpretation of Equestrian history. I hope you don't mind me incorporating bits of this into my own writing. :twilightsmile:

That awkward moment when you post a comment and it shows up twice...

Wow... this is really good.

@Flutterbreeze, I'd be honoured for you to use my interpretations on things :twilightsmile:

So far I am loving this fanfiction even though I am using different types of music to help with the different situations that are in the story but still the story has this sort of Dragon Quest feel to it that just makes it so... addicting. Keep up the good work friend.

So much... text.

My EYE'S their bleeding rainbows.

Sweet baby Luna the pain.

And i do believe my jaw just performed a sonic rainboom, the way it hit he floor.

Magnificent. Perfect. Amazing.

So long.... This is my fandream come true. Thank you.

Now, onto the review!

Spelling/Grammar-With that wall of text, you'd think i'd find an error or seven. NOPE. You, my good sir, have foiled the sonic fine-tooth comb.

Story- Better than most. A lot of fics pass through my browser, and since it's inception, this has ranked VERY high. I'm sad i didn't get to leave a review sooner!

Socks - Coming? Maybe?

Also... When will they actually find an element? This has been bugging me for the last bit and a half. Next walloftex- I mean, Chapter?

Looking EVER forward to more!

-The Librarian  

>>109392

They've already found two...

Each chapter is longer than the last. Already there are more words in a chapter than most short stories have in their entirety. And... It looks like we're barely half way through the story, if that. :trollestia: My goodness, man, writing a novel!

But yes, well done, as usual. :moustache:

I'm liking where this is going; the whole story so far is really well thought out and I'm liking the foreshadowing of the future events (Grand and Mightful Viator, Zecora ancestor, etc). Question: are the apple seeds they plant the origin of Sweet Apple Acres? cause that makes total sense to me if its true. also, did that dragon say "Ro-Dah!"? I wonder where that's from...XD

I nearly had a D'AAW attack at the Babby Luna part:rainbowkiss:

#27 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Learning ·

Another excellent chapter, looking forward to the next one :twilightsmile:

#28 · 146w, 6d ago · · · Learning ·

It's interesting the way you write your OCs.

Needs moar views:pinkiegasp:

This is easily my favorite story that I'm following. The characters are all wonderful and fully three dimensional, the writing is always top notch, and the imagery makes me feel like I'm right there.

Promise you won't ever stop?

Another excellent chapter! :rainbowkiss:

Hehe, gotta love the Trixie and Zecora ancestors. This writing style certainly makes for one interesting fanfic!

Perhaps the start of Sweet Apple Acres as the group dropped the apple seeds on the ground?

And was that the second and third parts of the Unrelenting Force shout that the dragon did? FUS-RO-DAH! :flutterrage:

Interesting that this story hasn't gotten more attention, it's exceptional, after all. By the looks of things, this isn't even close to being complete, is it? I mean, there are the other elements to gather, of course, but on top of that, we are yet to see anything involving Luna's banishment or anything about Discord becoming the Lord of Chaos. The story is tagged 'Sad' on EQD after all, and I haven't seen any particularly sad parts yet, (bar the zebra village getting destroyed) so I should think that more sad parts are on their way. I certainly look forward to the way you will weave the story, as it appears that this story has a large amount of weaving yet to do!

The plot, the characters, the wording, everything about this story is pure genius! :pinkiehappy:  

i just want to say that i love this story and hope you continue on with it for a while. i think it is amazingly well written and ive been enthralled in it ever since i started reading. still waiting for the newest chapter!

It's always such a nice perk to my day when i see this story updated.

Thanks for all the hard work!

thank you so much for this new chapter! yours is by far my favorite story. day = made

Fantastic. This story has been updated.

What a good way to end a friday.

And I fear for Redstone.

#40 · 140w, 4d ago · · · Learning ·

I have been following this story for quite some time, and I must say, I am quite frankly disgusted with myself for not commenting 'till now. So this is what I have to say about this story so far:

This is an absolutely amazing story! Every detail, form the G1 ponies, to the OCs, to the three G4 characters, is perfect. The way the story flows, the amount of description, the switching between the main story, and the multiple side stories, all amazing!

I love the elements of chaos, and how they complement the elements of harmony, rather then mirror them as in most fics.

The Idea that Discord and Celestia were siblings, truly this fits in with the way they address each other in canon far better then them dating.

I kinda feel bad for Craggy, but I do know what its like to deal with people like him...

I also love how you work in canocal revelations about this time period, for example how Star Swirl mentored Clover the Clever. I can't what to see what you do with our latest revelation that Star Swirl unlocked the secret of time travel!

Truly, I could go on and on with praises and complements, but I think you get the picture: I love this story! :rainbowkiss:

That was a good chapter, Not much to say after my last comment, so lets check the score...

The confirmed elements so far are:

Ambition -Firefly

Pride - Viator

and I'll eat my hat if Dawn didn't just earn the element of Will

Now that still leaves eight elements unassigned, but I think I have a few guesses...

Innovation -Surprise

Laughter - Discord

Curiosity - Kromi

Honesty - Bright Eyes

Kindness - Luna

Generosity - Coin Bag

Loyalty - Craggy

Magic - Celestia

Some of these I'm a little more confident about then others, but thats where my theories are at the moment

Well, it looks like I was right about Discord earning the element of laughter, which fits the canon very well, as he did claim

laughter to be his favorite.

I kinda thought they would be joined by a buffalo on there quest, but I guess you have enough characters as it is, so thats fine.

I'm guessing Surprise will be next to get her Element? I'm looking forward to that...

New chapter! Greatest day!

And I was wondering when we'd see Craggy again. I kinda missed the moron.

Craggy...never stops chasing you...ever. :pinkiegasp:

Greatest fanfic in all of history. And it only gets better with every update.:pinkiehappy:

If he has his sights on you, he WILL find you.

He might not be fast but HE NEVER STOPS!

Yayyyy Craggy's back!

Love the way you write Starswirl btw ^^

great read. always love the new chapters!:pinkiehappy::derpytongue2:

Very nice, I was a bit confused by the opening section and had to check the chapter number.  Great job overall.

#49 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Farewells ·

I'd just like to apologise to anyone who does happen to read this humble story of mine about the massive delay! Both me and my editor have had things to deal with, etc! Anyway, I hope to get back on track and write more regularly. Thanks again to anyone who takes the time to read my work!

#50 · 128w, 5d ago · · · Farewells ·

"OK new story lets see what this one is about"

*looks at number of words*

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