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Discord and Celestia go to the beach and Discord asks Celestia if he can bury her in the sand.

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The Plot Of The Story · 30th Oct 2017 · 1,104 words
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Bad End · 30th Oct 2017 · 645 words
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Good End · 30th Oct 2017 · 447 words
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Lesolan - Rest In Peace

Lesolan - Rest In Peace #1 · Oct 31st, 2017 · · · The Plot Of The Story ·

What is with the dialogue...?

INFUSCATE #2 · Oct 31st, 2017 · · · The Plot Of The Story ·

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Pretty sure hes brain washing her... or its just terribly written.

Guardian Blade #3 · Jul 15th, 2018 · · · Good End ·

Nice story! You could use some work on writing how they talk, but it was still an enjoyable read! I’d suggest trying to make it sound a bit more natural. But I’m sure you’ll get better with practice!

Have a wonderful time!
Sincerely, Guardian Blade the positive analyzer.

CAPTAIN YOSHI HD

CAPTAIN YOSHI HD #4 · Jul 15th, 2018 · · · Good End ·

Thanks for commenting. Please, check out my other stories.

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