Well, it's certainly an effective way to draw out the story rather than "climax" after three chapters. With Chrysalis not seeing the literal gift horse with her mouth open for prench kisses, there's at least a half dozen chapters of gruesome drama before somebuggy lets her wall down enough for the Sun to shine on her.
Ignoring my quip, she continued speaking even as she came to a stop in front of me. “She was young, of course. Far too young to take on the full weight of my responsibility. But still, I cared for her, I raised her, and watched as she grew into the mare she is today. Another pillar that could support Equestria alongside me—the Unquenchable Love that the land deserved.”
I bet it isn't what you meant, but this made me think about the old "I want someone else to do my work" Celestia.
There was a look in her eyes I had never seen before, even back when we had fought during the wedding.
huh..II nearly imaged she couldn't get that angry again at her, at least not to that level since she seems to love her.
“I’ve had my fair share of lovers in the past,” Celestia continued softly, ignoring my outburst. “Consorts, both stallions and mares, all whom I’ve bedded, all in secret. And none of them… not a single one… ever made me feel the level of submissiveness that I felt because you that day.” She kept her nose pressed against mine. Her hot breath washed over my face, bringing with it the scent of vanilla.
hhhmmm long life or not, I dislike it if it sounds like they only did one night stands or used their power to get some free sex from their guards.
“You… want me… to dominate you?” I gave her an incredulous look, and she nodded. “Sexually?” Again, she nodded, and I let out a choking laugh as everything became clear. This earned me a startled gasp from Celestia, but I ignored her.
one of the rare times that it seems I could like it when the story starts to focus on the sex before feelings could develop.
As we went, my mind wandered back to the look on Celestia’s face when I had refused. I wanted to smirk at my triumph—as minute as it was—but I found that I just couldn’t do it. Her expression hadn’t been one of somepony whose plans had just failed. Instead, the corners of my mouth tugged downwards. It had been a different look—one that I had seen before.
I liked that happening, because i like that chrysalis is so much believing into that whole conspiracy stuff, that she can't see anything else. I also like it, because I don't exactly want Chrysalis to be the hives whore or all for sex without any feelings again. There are enough theorys about how she can or cannot produce eggs if she has no sex, or how she can get love differently from that, that I don't need to accept the theory that seems to be kind of canon in most eyes.
I'm not sure wether or not I got that right, but did I understand correctly that Celestia is responsible for the Changelings having holes?
"That is, until a new alicorn emerged. One whom you are intimately familiar with.” At this, she shot me a cool glance. I returned the look. “The insides of her mare bits are neon blue, in case you’re curious.”
What would be better? : "I never wanted to know that one..." OR : "Everyone knows that, she is called princess of love for a reason."
Who would have known that the Princess of the Sun had a domination fetish!
I'm sure everybrony knew...
Good chapter! I'm curious what might happen next. And don't worry about infrequent chapters. Good work (and real live!) take time.
This was amazing, right until the moment the BDSM thing came into play. Not my cup of tea. Will continue reading, but not sure if I will stay if it goes full "50 shades of hay".
I did not see that particular confession happening. The timing could have been better on Celestia's part. Chrysalis is injured. Parts of her skin are flaking off, this is not the time to invite her to partake in strenuous activities. And I can't imagine it's all that attractive, for that matter.
You might be overstating the height difference. Celestia is huge, but so is Chrysalis.
Damn, haven't even gotten to the sex yet and already its a bit steamy in here. Can't wait for Chrysalis to get the hint. Loving this story so far. Its my favorite ship and its being played better than I could ever dream of. Looking forward to more.
I hope that this stroy will be finished. There are so many stories that are incompleted and good by this autor that I start felling that it's like habbit.
YHaY(Though that one just needs epilogue or even just "finished" mark), "Princess", "Batty family"...
This story is Incredible, with fully bakground bedding and amazing detail descriptions. It’s surely caught my attention. I can’t wait to see the next chapter! Please be alive . By the way, I was curiously to see what if all the characters change to opposite genders...... and it feels pretty weird ; but kind of cute too
“You… want me… to dominate you?” I gave her an incredulous look, and she nodded. “Sexually?” Again, she nodded, and I let out a choking laugh as everything became clear. This earned me a startled gasp from Celestia, but I ignored her.
she basically are thinking about :" ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?"
Slowly, we both tilted our heads to the side. Celestia’s eyes closed, her lips puckered, and she began to lean forward tentatively, inching ever so closer to mine. I could feel her breath on my lips—quick and sporadic, with the faintest hint of the scent of vanilla to it. Her anticipation and nervousness was sapid, the flavor making my mouth water once more.
Oh, she hang Celestia good
“It was the perfect plan too,” I chuckled, “because you get to keep your pure image. I can see the stories now. The world will see you offer aid to a fallen foe. That foe then turns on you and you regrettably need to put her down.” Sneering up at her, I shook my head. “You are still seen as the benevolent ruler, and I get put out to the great pasture in the sky. A win-win for you.”
“It was the perfect plan too,” I chuckled, “because you get to keep your pure image. I can see the stories now. The world will see you offer aid to a fallen foe. That foe then turns on you and you regrettably need to put her down.” Sneering up at her, I shook my head. “You are still seen as the benevolent ruler, and I get put out to the great pasture in the sky. A win-win for you.”
It is a very good point, it actually changing the mood of the story when Chrysalis pointed this out
Ah, the name of this fic might explain a bit. I got an odd comment on my story regarding sex when my fic clearly didn't have any and I think the names might've had something to do with that. Maybe I'm wrong but having no idea this even existed, I named mine The Masks We Wear. Again I could be reading too much into it but eh, it's possible.
I hope that when Chrysalis becomes mistress to Celestia, she puts a bit of a focus on humiliating and degrading Celestia, befitting her (formerly) evil personality.
Since this fic is in the princest group, I've gotten the deliscious idea of Chrysalis restraining Celestia, transforming into Luna, and forcing Celestia to orgasm to the sounds and body of her sister.
Welcome back word slave!
And how does Thorax feel about this?
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i doubt he knows
You have killed me, you monster!
The teasing in this chapter is really freaking hot, too. Too bad Chrysalis thinks it's all a plot. What a cockblock!
Yay, new chapter!
My reaction is the same as Chryssi's: "wat?"
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Kidding btw take your time
Yeah...
Busy bein' dead.
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In all seriousness, welcome back!
Still waiting for the sex.
glad to see that this story is still being taken seriously and didn't turn into just another short clop fic.
Oh God I lost it so hard there
Ouch, that ending. So much pain into those words. How can you make such an hilarious chapter end in a gut punch like that?
Still a wonderful story, though. It's always nice when an author can make you like being hurt.
Celly certainly would
And then they kiss.
Literally 1 second after the ending of the chapter. Chrysalis is teleported through plot magic in-front of Celestia a-
... *looks at clock* oh boy, time to go to sleep.
Nice chapter!
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I think you mean clam jam not cock block as there are non.
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The cock-block refers to me.
Well now, I did not see that coming!
Take your time, though, I would rather the story be well done than rushed ;3
This is very good. Please continue.
So Chrysalis ends up remaining affable with Equestria by being a pussy whipped dom.
Can't wait for the next chapter~!
IT'S
ALIIIIIVEEE!!!
Alright, on to this then.
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PM the author these notes, for us on mobile this takes up a ton of room.
As for the author, great chapter. Just don't play too much hard-to-get with Chryssi or we are gonna get bored.
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Well, it's certainly an effective way to draw out the story rather than "climax" after three chapters. With Chrysalis not seeing the literal gift horse with her mouth open for prench kisses, there's at least a half dozen chapters of gruesome drama before somebuggy lets her wall down enough for the Sun to shine on her.
This thing just keeps getting better and better. I love it!
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ah thought you where talking about Celestia.
I bet it isn't what you meant, but this made me think about the old "I want someone else to do my work" Celestia.
huh..II nearly imaged she couldn't get that angry again at her, at least not to that level since she seems to love her.
hhhmmm long life or not, I dislike it if it sounds like they only did one night stands or used their power to get some free sex from their guards.
one of the rare times that it seems I could like it when the story starts to focus on the sex before feelings could develop.
I liked that happening, because i like that chrysalis is so much believing into that whole conspiracy stuff, that she can't see anything else.
I also like it, because I don't exactly want Chrysalis to be the hives whore or all for sex without any feelings again.
There are enough theorys about how she can or cannot produce eggs if she has no sex, or how she can get love differently from that, that I don't need to accept the theory that seems to be kind of canon in most eyes.
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...I refuse.
Chrysalis, you stubborn foal. I want to give, Celestia a hug.
Great job!
I'm not sure wether or not I got that right, but did I understand correctly that Celestia is responsible for the Changelings having holes?
What would be better?
: "I never wanted to know that one..." OR
: "Everyone knows that, she is called princess of love for a reason."
I'm sure everybrony knew...
Good chapter!
I'm curious what might happen next.
And don't worry about infrequent chapters. Good work (and real live!) take time.
This was amazing, right until the moment the BDSM thing came into play. Not my cup of tea.
Will continue reading, but not sure if I will stay if it goes full "50 shades of hay".
Busy writing Chris's Batty Family?
Joking! Please don't hurt me!
Thank goodness! I've been waiting for an update!
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Pretty sure it's a nod to the Fiendship is Magic comic featuring Chrysalis' history.
Nice to see this update again.
I did not see that particular confession happening. The timing could have been better on Celestia's part. Chrysalis is injured. Parts of her skin are flaking off, this is not the time to invite her to partake in strenuous activities. And I can't imagine it's all that attractive, for that matter.
You might be overstating the height difference. Celestia is huge, but so is Chrysalis.
Damn, haven't even gotten to the sex yet and already its a bit steamy in here. Can't wait for Chrysalis to get the hint. Loving this story so far. Its my favorite ship and its being played better than I could ever dream of. Looking forward to more.
It's alive!
Also, take your time. It's worth the wait with the quality your stories have
Wha-
Wat.
Maybe not the best moment, Sunbutt, I'm quite sure strenuous activities right now would be dangerous to Chryssie.
C-c-c-clam jam!
... Weren't Sunbutt and Bugbutt pretty much the same height?
Huh this reminds me of a manga in which an elf wants a orc to have his way with her only for the orc wanting nothing to do with her.
I hope that this stroy will be finished. There are so many stories that are incompleted and good by this autor that I start felling that it's like habbit.
YHaY(Though that one just needs epilogue or even just "finished" mark), "Princess", "Batty family"...
This story is Incredible, with fully bakground bedding and amazing detail descriptions. It’s surely caught my attention. I can’t wait to see the next chapter! Please be alive . By the way, I was curiously to see what if all the characters change to opposite genders...... and it feels pretty weird ; but kind of cute too
she basically are thinking about :" ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?"
Oh, she hang Celestia good
Clever girl
You know, I had a gut feeling from the very beginning of the story that Tia was eventually going to be revealed as a hardcore subby.
It is a very good point, it actually changing the mood of the story when Chrysalis pointed this out
I started reading expecting a clopfic, but oh how wrong I was and I couldn't be happier. This story is like gold in written word.
Ah, the name of this fic might explain a bit. I got an odd comment on my story regarding sex when my fic clearly didn't have any and I think the names might've had something to do with that. Maybe I'm wrong but having no idea this even existed, I named mine The Masks We Wear. Again I could be reading too much into it but eh, it's possible.
You are a great writer and I know you have things you need to attend to... but PLEASE write another chapter soon!
I hope that when Chrysalis becomes mistress to Celestia, she puts a bit of a focus on humiliating and degrading Celestia, befitting her (formerly) evil personality.
Since this fic is in the princest group, I've gotten the deliscious idea of Chrysalis restraining Celestia, transforming into Luna, and forcing Celestia to orgasm to the sounds and body of her sister.
Are you still there?
impatiently awaits the next chapter
Glorious.