That song in the middle, so sweet, I think that is only the second changeling song I have heard, well done. I am still very interested, keep up the good work!
I can only imagine what Celestia said to Shining to make him squawk.
Yeah, Chryssie's reaction to Thorax seems about right. Also, it's kind of frightening that even three quarters dead and missing a leg she's so dangerous.
The story feels kind of right so far, the only bad thing was the memory of Raindeer Thorax. I really prefer the old Changelings, but the only look I really dislike is the new one for Thorax and the fact that like in a cliche, he was the one that turned into the new king.
Oh man I really want to read more, I would nearly already give you a fave already.
edit: I could image her not being angry at all, maybe she has given up on her live and is only going to get angry again if Celestia gives her a reason to live again, which is maybe a reason to be angry about those memories again.
Sometimes I like to think that the bad guys think the good ones are the bad and the good guys to the same.
8345344 I would like you to come back and do these things. 1) Look at the rating of this story. 2) Look at the tags of this story. 3) Look at the groups this story is in. 4) Realize you asked a stupid question.
8345675 I have seen stories with the sex tag that had zero clop in it. ergo why I asked. so forgive me if my question stands. Also i don know HOW to look and see if any given story is part of a group unless i wet through each group and looked for any given story
8345698 You do realize that you can see the groups this story has been placed in by looking under the long box of Also Liked/Similar/Author? It's a gray box that says Featured In, and it says what groups have this story in it. I fail to see how anybody could miss that box, but if in fact you did miss it all of your time on FIMFiction, there you go I suppose.
8345566 "The ride never ends" is a reference to Mr Bone's wild ride, an extremely long ride built in Roller Coaster Tycoon 2. The kicker...is that the ride's exit just leads back into the ride. ergo...the ride never ends.
That said, I'm not quite sure why RayCon is using that particular meme at this time.
8345698 Firstly, I would like to thank this guy 8345786 for explaining the simple answer to your problem. Honestly, I'm amazed you've made this far complicating things
Secondly, almost all authors that actually use the sex tag but have no explicit sex scenes usually outright say it. Since the author never stated it, pretty plain to know what happens.
8345786 I will be honest I did indeed miss it/forgot about it due to memory issues *shrugs* Anyways just by seeing a few of the groups this is in I will assume (since the author hasnt said one way or another to me yet lol) that it is indeed a clop fic and have to pass on it. No offense to those who do enjoy em they are just not my thing.
Someone help me understand this cause it was always stupid to me ive read so many stories were their taking about chrysalis like she is the baddest villain they had and she can't be good she is doing what her body was made to do and don't give me that bull about how the other ones changed for let's be fucking real they shit was lame and another this story did it like the other (not saying it was a bad thing cause he/she made my point when Luna was like not to give her a second chance but celestial said should I left u to ur fate and Luna want to me mad please) in my book Luna discord and terick we're badder then her Luna would have killed the hold world by making it night forever discord would have destroyed the world cause he gave terick everyone's magic and terick would have wiped out everyone sombry would be just raging war with everyone and chrysalis was just feeding her hive so to me she was doing something I do every day eat
Good to know. I guess she just mangled, rather than killed, them. And she's apparently technically innocent of the attacks on those two cities, though I don't know if Celestia will share that secret without permission. That leaves... oh, only two thirds of the long list of crimes.
grinned, giggling to myself before singing softly:
Chrysalis is drugged out of her skull. That means that, as talented a singer as she proved to be in A Canterlot Wedding, this probably sounds horrible.
An enjoyable update. I like the relatively slow burn you've been taking for the introductory chapters and the way you're developing things in the background of Chrysalis' awareness here.
Well now, this looks interesting. I'll be looking forward to further updates. I only have one concern, this isn't going to be one of those Villain gets injured and falls in love with X character while being nursed back to health stories is it? Cause that would be so straightforward and cliche as to be full on painful. Nothing about Changelings should be straightforward no matter what canon says.
8346747 I know but I've read so many stories were they make her out so bad when she only feed on what her body can feed on like me or u we eat meat and its OK like the griffons but the Channeling's look like monsters to them and since they eat love oooh its so bad
Oh and on the chapter itself, I forgot to mention, but having Chrysalis in such bad shape is a good set up, because it sidesteps her ability to resist arrest and engages pony nurturing instincts to an extent (she's still huge and intimidating looking) so they aren't as likely to argue as much with Celestia about taking her in.
By the way, did I misread or is she throwing around all those doctors and nurses while not just badly injured but moving on only three legs? Shows how strong she is in comparison. I hope that's something well-fed changelings can heal or that Equestria has good prosthetic tech (though I suppose if they can make people sprout wings with magic, they can probably at least temporarily replace limbs).
8346646 I think that was more the content, though. It's pretty depressing for a children's song and it's pretty clear Chrysalis isn't making it up as she goes along, so this has to be a Changeling cultural thing.
And make it 'complete' :D
more! MORE! i require more!
That nursey song. Nice chapter!
That song in the middle, so sweet, I think that is only the second changeling song I have heard, well done.
I am still very interested, keep up the good work!
I did find one thing
is "know" supposed to be "now" here?
“Me.” Replied Thorax, evenly.
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Surely nobody could be that cruel.
8345078
It would be ironically great joke
I am enjoying this story immensely, can't wait for the next chapter
Wuvy-Dovey Smoochy Land and the signing were hilarious.
If Youtube were a thing in Equestria, Chrysalis singing would be the anesthesia video of the year!
hi how are you
Best Story ever, I love the implication of Celestias feeling towards Chrysalis.
8344982
I think I know what they meant but me no grammer so idk how to type it XD
This isn't a clopfic is it? Please say it is not a clopfic
Nice chapter, the pov was executed expertly.
I can only imagine what Celestia said to Shining to make him squawk.
Yeah, Chryssie's reaction to Thorax seems about right. Also, it's kind of frightening that even three quarters dead and missing a leg she's so dangerous.
That song.
'Even know I couldn’t sense' - Even now
I like this story
The story feels kind of right so far, the only bad thing was the memory of Raindeer Thorax.
I really prefer the old Changelings, but the only look I really dislike is the new one for Thorax and the fact that like in a cliche, he was the one that turned into the new king.
Oh man I really want to read more, I would nearly already give you a fave already.
edit: I could image her not being angry at all, maybe she has given up on her live and is only going to get angry again if Celestia gives her a reason to live again, which is maybe a reason to be angry about those memories again.
Sometimes I like to think that the bad guys think the good ones are the bad and the good guys to the same.
8345001
HAH! Thorax is the biggest bitch that ever bitched in the entire history of bitches, he knows his place.
8345344
THE RIDE NEVER ENDS
8345529
uhh what?
8345566
T H E / R I D E / N E V E R / E N D S
8345568
The Riden ever ends?
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Wut?
CELESTIA'S ACTUALLY A VERY LIGHT SHADE OF PINK STORY'S INACCURA- the song was absolutely adorable.
8345344
I would like you to come back and do these things.
1) Look at the rating of this story.
2) Look at the tags of this story.
3) Look at the groups this story is in.
4) Realize you asked a stupid question.
8345675
I have seen stories with the sex tag that had zero clop in it. ergo why I asked. so forgive me if my question stands. Also i don know HOW to look and see if any given story is part of a group unless i wet through each group and looked for any given story
8345698
You do realize that you can see the groups this story has been placed in by looking under the long box of Also Liked/Similar/Author? It's a gray box that says Featured In, and it says what groups have this story in it. I fail to see how anybody could miss that box, but if in fact you did miss it all of your time on FIMFiction, there you go I suppose.
8345566
"The ride never ends" is a reference to Mr Bone's wild ride, an extremely long ride built in Roller Coaster Tycoon 2. The kicker...is that the ride's exit just leads back into the ride. ergo...the ride never ends.
That said, I'm not quite sure why RayCon is using that particular meme at this time.
8345698
Firstly, I would like to thank this guy 8345786 for explaining the simple answer to your problem. Honestly, I'm amazed you've made this far complicating things
Secondly, almost all authors that actually use the sex tag but have no explicit sex scenes usually outright say it. Since the author never stated it, pretty plain to know what happens.
8345786
I will be honest I did indeed miss it/forgot about it due to memory issues *shrugs* Anyways just by seeing a few of the groups this is in I will assume (since the author hasnt said one way or another to me yet lol) that it is indeed a clop fic and have to pass on it. No offense to those who do enjoy em they are just not my thing.
8345896
While there will be sex, it won't be the sole focus of the story. I like plot with my erotica.
8345903
I see Thanks for letting me know.
8345903
Will the next chapter be out in a week or less :3?
8345920
Depends on how fast I write it.
I like the direction that this story is heading in so far. Well done!
8345896
Memory problems... You and me both my good lad. Glad to be of assistance.
8345954
my memory issues are from brain Surgery from when I was ten lol. But it sure beats the alternative
Tainted love, oh-oh-oh, tainted love
I am enjoying this a lot.
i sincerely hope you dont... LSDfruitloop chrysalis in this story. I quite frnakly hate what thorax and the xhangelings turned into.
Someone help me understand this cause it was always stupid to me ive read so many stories were their taking about chrysalis like she is the baddest villain they had and she can't be good she is doing what her body was made to do and don't give me that bull about how the other ones changed for let's be fucking real they shit was lame and another this story did it like the other (not saying it was a bad thing cause he/she made my point when Luna was like not to give her a second chance but celestial said should I left u to ur fate and Luna want to me mad please) in my book Luna discord and terick we're badder then her Luna would have killed the hold world by making it night forever discord would have destroyed the world cause he gave terick everyone's magic and terick would have wiped out everyone sombry would be just raging war with everyone and chrysalis was just feeding her hive so to me she was doing something I do every day eat
Good to know. I guess she just mangled, rather than killed, them. And she's apparently technically innocent of the attacks on those two cities, though I don't know if Celestia will share that secret without permission. That leaves... oh, only two thirds of the long list of crimes.
Chrysalis is drugged out of her skull. That means that, as talented a singer as she proved to be in A Canterlot Wedding, this probably sounds horrible.
An enjoyable update. I like the relatively slow burn you've been taking for the introductory chapters and the way you're developing things in the background of Chrysalis' awareness here.
Well now, this looks interesting. I'll be looking forward to further updates.
I only have one concern, this isn't going to be one of those Villain gets injured and falls in love with X character while being nursed back to health stories is it? Cause that would be so straightforward and cliche as to be full on painful. Nothing about Changelings should be straightforward no matter what canon says.
8346485
it was good enough to make celestia emotional!
Love the pace and the chapter as a whole! More soon, please!
8346459
But... we haven't heard Chrysalis's side to all this yet; just the ponies'.
8346747
I know but I've read so many stories were they make her out so bad when she only feed on what her body can feed on like me or u we eat meat and its OK like the griffons but the Channeling's look like monsters to them and since they eat love oooh its so bad
Mmm... oh Charles, I like this one.
Yeah, I'm definitely gonna follow this one.
Just the one on here, and it's a very small one. http://imgur.com/a/FF72G
...One.
Oh and on the chapter itself, I forgot to mention, but having Chrysalis in such bad shape is a good set up, because it sidesteps her ability to resist arrest and engages pony nurturing instincts to an extent (she's still huge and intimidating looking) so they aren't as likely to argue as much with Celestia about taking her in.
By the way, did I misread or is she throwing around all those doctors and nurses while not just badly injured but moving on only three legs? Shows how strong she is in comparison. I hope that's something well-fed changelings can heal or that Equestria has good prosthetic tech (though I suppose if they can make people sprout wings with magic, they can probably at least temporarily replace limbs).
8346646
I think that was more the content, though. It's pretty depressing for a children's song and it's pretty clear Chrysalis isn't making it up as she goes along, so this has to be a Changeling cultural thing.
8347064
well yeah, their lives sucked, they lived in the desert and constantly had a food shortage. poor little buggies
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