When a human tries to kill the Princesses of the Sun and the Moon, along with Princess Twilight and the Element of Honesty- and fails, of course- he's taken into custody after he turns a knife on himself.
Needless to say, Celestia has a lot of questions. How did a human get into her ballroom undetected? What is a human? Why does he have such a good grasp of alchemy?
And why is he a subject of Queen Chrysalis?
I really like the first chapter and hope for more ;)
Dude, this is a great story. Waiting for it to continue.
really like the idea hope you continue
Not bad. Any word on some updates?
Hmm, that was a good first chapter. Short, gets the core points across but leaves many questions hanging to make readers curious. I'd love to see this continued.