Great work keep up the good work

Heh, trying to stop a Astartes by pulling on his cape, only for her face to meet the floor in such a feeble attempt.

hehe trying to trick gabriel angelos. only one being has ever done so and you know what they needed outside help to do it

...HERICTS!!

Huh.... I knew Angelos had a teleport homer in his armor, but I didn't think it could do that...

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YOU DARE PLOT AGAINST THE ANGELS OF DEATH?! COMMENCE EXTERMINATUS!!!!
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But besides that, this was a great chapter, if a little short for my tastes. I personally am very excited to see Gabriel Angelos kick some Gryphon ass and purge some HERETICS, in the name of the God-Empress, Celestia. Very excited, well done. I am willing to help you out if you want with your writers block as I am writing a similar story as well. Just PM me.

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I haven’t played a Dawn of War game in a while, but I vaguely recall there being a sort of Thunderbolt kind of thing a nanosecond before the Terminator would appear. I just sorta made it more dramatic looking I guess

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Yeah, the Terminators would have a lightning effect on them when they teleported, and then they would set to their gruesome work of close combat when they reappeared.

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indeed.. even more so with assault terminators

New chapters ?????

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So, this story was part of a collaborative effort between myself and my co-writer, to effectively create a multi-story universe similar to stuff like the Hunger Games. Several displaced along with a host of others get sent here to fight to the death and eventually the winner gets a free wish.

Unfortunately, the scope of the project became WAY too large, and our attentions waned, and currently this story is dead in the water. If I can ever get back to writing consistently, I may consider rebooting this story on its own, but for the time being the adventures of Gabriel Angelos are on hiatus.