Yes I know it's a little short, but i didn't say anything about this being a good story.

Part 2 will be released when I see some feedback, doesn't have to be good, just something.

Awesome so far, but you need to write some more! Also, this IS just her nightmare....Right?

>>5107551075

Don't worry, It's all a dream. honest

And now you see why it's teen rated.

So, can I do gore any good?

And here's part 3

This just sorta come out on a whim, I don't expect it to be considered TEH BEST, but that would be nice

Nice story. I like it. :)

:D Great story so far, but, I'm not really sure about the part with Pinkie talking about organs and meat-flavored cupcakes. lol

Do ponies even eat meat? :P

>>148778148778

Pinkie is Pinkie, who knows what goes on in her head.

>>149002149002

javascript:smilie(''); True, very true...

>>148778148778 No,ponies don't eat meat.If they did,they would die from it because they are herbivores,which means they only eat plants.

>>544387544387 Actually, there are horses who eat meat.

>>544513544513 That.....is unsettling.

This not bad the story is well nice but the fucking game scared the shit out of me

Good interpretation of the game. I'm gonna read when pinkie goes crazy

>>544387544387

Plus, us humans are technically herbivores, we just adapted so we can eat meat. That's why we have to cook our meat, and omnivores and carnivores don't have to. OH, and I'm reading this after playing the games. They are fricking scary.

>>874016874016 Humans are omnivores. We can eat both meat and plants. Also we don't have to cook our meat, but we run the risk of food poisoning if we don't.

Someone needs to write a fic on "Luna Game"

Edit: just looked at your other work, you already have.... I'll go now.