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gingerninja666


I don't want to be right. I just desperately want to be proven wrong. You can imagine how many friends THAT makes me.

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Please tell me Dash goes to strangle Zecora afterwards, what she did GRRRRR!

So what did that potion do to them anyway?

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As it's explained, it makes them feel what Zephyr is feeling. As an example, he is greatly attracted to Rainbow Dash, so when Rainbow sees herself in the mirror she feels what he feels and is greatly attracted to herself.

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I know bout rainbow, but what the other?

And also, where had you been? I hadn't seen you putting out any news chapter and new stories for long time?

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The potion has the same effect on everyone. Everyone feels what Zephyr feels.

I was gone for a few months, back now working on stories, not much to say there. I generally post entire stories and don't really do chapters releasing at different times at all.

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For the first one: right....

And for the second: what kind of new story you are making?

So few stories about Zephyr... and this one even has mind control of a sort? I'm curious indeed!

So good, Windy and Zephyr deserve spinoff stories

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You think so? ^^ i do adore Windy.

Wonderful take on ole Zeph. And exceedingly clever to match his insecurity against Windy's unwavering support.

Hello. I am a completely straight man.

I have upvoted this story because the sex scene was so well-crafted.

Just thought I'd let you know.

Various scenes throughout this fic make me VERY glad this doesn't have the romance tag on it.

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Like, pretty much every scene that has Dash in it.

I AM curious as to how many chapters you think this'll end up being overall.

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I don't plan for this to be absurdly long, but keep in mind we still haven't seen Flutters or her mommy yet. =P

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So do you not like the scenes Dashie is placed in?

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I do, since they work for the story
I just am hardcore against the ZephyrDash ship

This story just keeps getting kinkier and kinkier, not that I'm complaining

Absolutely fantastic story.:heart:
I hope Fluttershy can teach her parents how to properly "appreciate" one another before the night ends. Seeing her coach her parents parents through their first sexual experience with each other would be super fun.

Love to see a short epilogue.

Was that last part supposed to be funny, because I didn't think it was at all. If Rainbow beat Zephyr enough that his blood is on her knuckles than he should at the very least be in a hospital. So instead of thinking Zephyr got his comeuppance, I'm just feeling sorry for him over a situation that wasn't entirely his fault.

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Yeah. I realized that it was probably a little much after thinking it over a bit longer. I can make an edit to remove the blood if you think that might be better. My intention was that she just gave him a swift shot in the face, enough to make his nose bleed, but he's not going to be badly hurt.

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Yeah, I guessed that was your intent, but a punch to the face really wouldn't leave a blood stain on someone's fist. When I read it, all I could think about was everyone else looking in horror as Dash beat Zephyr to a bloody pulp.

So, yeah, might be better to leave that out. It was pretty much all Zecora's fault anyway.

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but a punch to the face really wouldn't leave a blood stain on someone's fist.

It would if you hit them in the nose and they bleed.

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No, it really wouldn't. A single quick jab to the face, even one hard enough to make a nose bleed, wouldn't leave a mark on the fist. At worst, the assailant might get a drop of blood on him/her, but nothing that would stain or be noticable.

Either Rainbow hit Zypher so hard that his nose and maybe his lips just exploded, or she bashed his face in multiple times. Both would send Zephyr to the hospital.

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