As I look through all this the story is well done. 8/10

I dont remember you asking me if you could use my pic as cover...

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Well for starters, I didn't know how to contact you or even knew you were so close, whenever I try to get into contact with artist I never get a reply, so that tiresome/disheartening routine ended. However, since I believe you are the actual artist I earnestly apologize, I will also say that you illustrate the most adorable Rarity I've ever known. I've been a fan of yours for years,(three to be exact) and if you wish I'll just remove it without question; laconic response or otherwise.

This... maybe rude, but frankly I don't care what you say at this point--I'm just surprised/giddy to have you here! And now I've learned that you've written two stories, ha! The cheeks on your art style is just so wonderfully--pinch-able!

My embarrassment aside, the illustration doesn't hold much merit here on my little story. And I repeat: just say the word, and I'll take it down.~