A human who dies in an infiltration mission, gets sent to Equestria unharmed and alive, but his body has been changed to adjust the magical world he calls home now. He'll do everything he can to fight for his new home world and keep it safe.
After a brief period of time of thinking upon this recorded group of symbols used to tell a tale after using my eyes to analyse each word of this section of the story, my mortal being has come to a conclusion that it has positive feelings towards this conglomeration of words commonly known as a story. I think I like it.
He's been a stallion, but Cadence put a spell on him because he left his daughter Flurry Heart all by herself in the castle not once but twice. The princesses were all treating him like a mare, and even started calling him princess.
I would say more stubborn than ignorant. Great chapter guy. Really brought a tear to my eye.
Felt a little rushed towards the end. None the less was a good chapter. Got me a little teary-eyed.
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Thanks. Glad you guys liked the chapter.
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Indignant?
After a brief period of time of thinking upon this recorded group of symbols used to tell a tale after using my eyes to analyse each word of this section of the story, my mortal being has come to a conclusion that it has positive feelings towards this conglomeration of words commonly known as a story.
I think I like it.
If Reyes and his daughter were voiced, what would they sound like?
8315994 Well just imagine their voices. Reyes has a deep voice almost booming voice and Allison has a soft high pitch voice.
*<>* well done Mister , have a 👍 n tracking
HAHA!! So that's why he's a female!!
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Yes indeedy. I was thinking of keeping him as a female, but it wouldn't go well with the story.
8329026 Hey thanks! Glad the story is to your liking.
cant wait for more
So good, can't wait for the next chapter
How can he like this Mare after just met each other?
8343952 Love comes in odd ways my friend. Just role wit it!
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Maybe, it's up to you though.
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Love is scary. But I can roll with this answer....
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Yeah. My opinion just flew into a mountain, crashed and burned. Then got shit upon. I'm not a fan of this story.
3 or 4/10
It truly had potential.
I apologize if my opinion is harsh, but when it comes to military story's, I have a tough scrutiny of those stories unless it say's otherwise.