• Member Since 4th Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Aug 16th, 2014

decembuary


I am trying to improve my writing. It's not very good.

Comments ( 2 )

I found this simple and charming.

It made me happy.

:twilightsmile: I like it. True to the characters, good descriptions of setting, and it isn't yet another grimdark or sad fic.

This needs to be longer. Other then a few infinitesimally small errors, the only thing that this is suffering from is length. I'd love to read more.

Cheers,
Havoc

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