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Follow the adventure of the Rookies, young trainers who enrolled at the Pokémon school of the elementary kindness holder. During their course to achieve their goal, they will face several opponents, encounter unknown Pokémon and make new friends.
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well this was a intresting read to say the least
*cough*
Proofreading
*cough
I like the idea, but I do not think fluttershy could handle that job.
Well, I can't say the description was misleading. By that, I mean what little I could read of the first chapter was practically word salad.
Spelling is... alright, but grammar, sentence structure, dialogue, tenses, punctuation and pretty much everything else needs some serious work, if I'm being honest.
It doesn't look like English is your first language. I would strongly suggest finding someone to proofread for you.
I'm not gonna leave a dislike, because I've read much worse, but it's still a long way from earning a like or fave. Sorry.
Fluttershy: Pick Charmander, Squirtle, Or Bulbasaur. Me: Charmander. Fluttershy: yay * gives Pokeballs * you can start you pokemon adventure..... you know.... if you want....
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What that like read a creepypasta?
The cover art is EqG, but the story is apparently MLP. I'd advise changing the art, as the current one is misleading.
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K I will change the picture
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Aha.
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What aha, i change
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Much better.
Huh? I think you made some mistakes. What did you mean the synopsis to say?
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I rewrite the sypnosie.
Follow the adventure of the Rookies, young trainers who enrolled at the Pokémon school of the elementary kindness holder. During their course to achieve their goal, they will face several opponents, encounter unknown Pokémon and make new friends.
I haven't read this story yet so I want to ask, is there Goodra? Because Fluttershy plus a Pokemon known to give big hugs would be adorable.
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For instant I don't put a Goodra but maybe for a future chapter
How many chapters long will this story be?
Maybe 20 or less chapter
Have you gotten an editor yet?
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Not yet