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A different story

Pinkie is baking cupcakes when she wonders what her life would be like if she didn't make cupcakes. A magic pony hears her wish and sends her on a few journeys to see what it would be like without friends, with enemies and with wings and a horn.

Chapters (4)

One different pony... · 18th Jun 2017 · 244 words
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A grey, grey world · 18th Jun 2017 · 251 words
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The war · 18th Jun 2017 · 302 words
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Epilogue: A heartbreak · 19th Jun 2017 · 241 words
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diablo4000

diablo4000 #1 · Jun 21st, 2017 · · · The war ·

ummmmmm what?

Crimson Dawn

Crimson Dawn #2 · Jun 22nd, 2017 · · · Epilogue: A heartbreak ·

I like how Pinkie and Dash appear to really be wanting to see the other but I think the story needs to slow down and spend more time developing its story more so we can get more from it. It is pretty hectic so far.

Still I always like stories where Pinkie and Dash interact a bit and they seem to have a bond here so that is cool.

Comment posted by Kunama Windrider deleted Jun 30th, 2017

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