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Fuzzyfurvert


I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.

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Sunset takes the bus from school out to Applejack's place. With a brief detour in between.


Written for the February 2017 Write Off prompt 'The Twilight Zone'.

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Nice. I just missed the usual Rod Serling's concluding monologue :raritywink:

Your chosen story title belies the less obvious rating. :ajbemused:

Greatly confused about what happened yet I oddly feel like some moral lesson has been learned. That about summarizes the show so hats off to you sir/madam. :moustache:

That was a bit of a strange experience, but I guess that should be expected.

Corrections offered without malice.

hundreds of time before

times
…but I usually like to get at least a paragraph in, first.

gotten to tagalong

tag along

with ever shift

every

Princess'

Princess's (matter of style)


I could hear the opening in Rod Serling. I can imagine the bus driving off, camera zooming and panning to follow, taking a turn, and the camera continues to zoom on the now-revealed Serling behind it, trlling you about what you'd just watched read.

doodoodoodoodoodoodoodoo

Brill idea, which Hasbro missed completely in the EG series.

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Whaaat

the mirids of humans

myriads?

Nice little story. Bizzare, but nice all the same.

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