So Far From Home

Matthew is lonely. His parents don't pay much attention to him, he doesn't have any friends, but he is very independent. One day, a spell from an old book sends him to Equestria. As he continues to interact with the residents of Ponyville, he finds a friendship that will last a lifetime. But nothing this good can be real...can it?

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Marine Magic

Marine Magic #1 · Jul 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Seems promising....... Meh I'll track it

Mr_Anderson

Mr_Anderson #2 · Jul 11th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

895609 thanks A lot! I wanted to take a slighty different approch on HiE. you know how most of the time the human does the adventure in ponyville, right? I decided I wanted the adventure to be about a journey that leads him home instead. Its gonna be sorta like the odyssey in that sense. Anyway I hope you enjoy the first part of the story. (The first 4 chapters are kinda a really long prologue.)

M E

M E #3 · Jul 13th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

Okay, there's not too many problems with this story apart from pacing and realism. Because seriously.

“I would like to say the same to you, but you asked first, so I’ll answer.” “ I’m something called a human being, or in scientific terms a Homo sapiens. I come from a place called planet Earth.”

Who the hell talks like that?

Mr_Anderson

Mr_Anderson #4 · Jul 13th, 2012 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I don't really know, but I kinda wanted him to sound formal in his introduction because its like there aliens to him right? He doesn't want to die on first contact. I will also work on my pacing.905207

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