It had been a week since Rarity and Fluttershy had considered telling Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy about their secret activities, and over the course of the week, whenever they were together, they were trying to pluck up the courage to tell them. Trying to remember that if Rainbow and Pinkie really loved this as much as they did, then farting, wetting, and messing in front of them wouldn't be any different than doing it in front of each other, which they could easily do without any shame.
I think you have a naming conflict here, you put Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy but I think you mean Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. Not saying that you are not pre-reading, just a small word mix up. Great story by the way.
I do read it after I finish writing it to see if there's any mistakes and such, make improvements, etc., but occasionally I miss something. And I appreciate it when someone catches it so I can fix it. And of course when someone likes the story
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I think you have a naming conflict here, you put Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy but I think you mean Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie.
Not saying that you are not pre-reading, just a small word mix up. Great story by the way.
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Thanks. Fixed
I do read it after I finish writing it to see if there's any mistakes and such, make improvements, etc., but occasionally I miss something. And I appreciate it when someone catches it so I can fix it. And of course when someone likes the story