Scootaloo's birthday is coming up and all she wants is her mother to be with her but convincing her mother to quit working to spend time with her will take more than just a talk.
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This is really good!
It's... interesting but a little awkward. Especially with the dialogue. A lot of it doesn't read like natural speech.
Especially:
No, no, no...