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BlackWater


I love ponies, bronies, and matrimonies! I'm an author, artist, and plushie-maker. I create stuff and I try to make it awesome. Relax. You're in good company. ❤ ~Since 2012~

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Rainbow Dash and Adagio have a lunch date with Applejack and Pinkie Pie. After Adagio leaves for work, Rainbow won't stop talking about her girlfriend. Applejack, who is going through rocky terrain with her own love life, has a short fuse. Pinkie Pie invents a new word.

NOTES
1. Takes place within the Twilight Shimmer story after Rainbow and Adagio start their relationship. Reading that story is not necessarily required.
2. Ships: Adashio, Sunlight, and Rarijack.
3. We need Rainbow Dash to do a cover of this.
4. Long after graduation from CHS. All characters are 18+

Rated Teen for some crude/coarse language and suggestive conversation.

Popular Stories: May 20, 2017

Art: Just a Friendship Games screencap.

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Comments ( 8 )

EEEEEEEEE!:pinkiehappy:

They were like the secondary characters in the Twilight Shimmer story with how much they showed up...and they are adorable in their own way! Faved already!

JMP

Sorry to say I wasn't really a fan. I loved "Twilight Shimmer", but this just felt...I don't know...too fast paced? I mean, the story didn't really go beyond what was listed in the description, and I'll admit it's been a while since I read "Twilight Shimmer", but was Rainbow always this much of a braggart about Adagio? Or in general?

Do I have to read another story to find out how Applejack ended up with Rarity?:ajsmug::heart::raritywink:

8178441
:yay: Yeppers. Dashie really stretched out into a greater role in Twilight Shimmer than the other members of the Mane 6. And then of course with Adagio later on. :twilightsmile:

8178530
It's just a short one-shot. So it's not meant to be a spread out story like the 48k Twilight Shimmer. As for how much Dashie bragged about Adagio in that story, not much because the story was really more of a focus on Twi and Sunny. Later on, Rainbow chills about it but in this story they are very new girlfriends. New love has a tendency to be...hyper about it and Rainbow's personality lends itself terribly to that. :rainbowwild:

8178539
On that note, not really. I mean it's really more of a super side thing at the end of Twilight Shimmer and is far less of a focus even than Adashio is in that story. Since this one was about Dashie and Dagi, it was a more notable thing but I didn't have any plans to expand on it. If enough people wanted to see it then I would consider writing it. :twilightsmile:

You do some really good work, but you really need to space between your paragraphs. It's much harder to read than it needs to be as a result.

I hear this whenever I see the title now that I think of it.

Rainbow Dash dropped her drink. Her mouth fell open with it. Did Adagio just shake her hips at her when she left the cafe? She winked too and made an obscene gesture. Was Rainbow Dash in over her head with this girl? Maybe.

Probably.

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