DA FUCK YOU DOING ON MY LAWN YOU LITTLE BASTARDS! WHY.... fans? well anything is possible
Devon (the dad) and Rainbow dash have been in the same world for a few months now. but now a problem arises that could tear them apart again
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Original My Little Dashie By -
My Little Dashie 2 - Who Am I By -
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Chapter 1-3 Reading at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWeCYkO5ag8&index=1&list=PLuy2IouJcJzXaI7LNo0c-M7QoofcQWxQa&t=271s
Having skipped My Little Dashie 2: Electric Boogaloo... let's complete the trilogy by seeing what Dash Hard With a Vengeance is about, shall we...? This ought to be... something. I like something. Something's my favorite.
You forgot to credit the original.
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Oh right. sry
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Wrong timeline
Why all the hate on my story?
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i don't hate i loved it i hope you make a third story in this timeline and a fourth with a happier ending where rainbow's human father *spoilers to the final story of the cannon "my little dashie"* either he doesn't die or die a less painful death. i was really sad that he died painfully in the cannon story of "my little dashie".
8576573 really? thanks. i thought chapter 1 to 4 were the better parts of the story. 5 and 6 were just superhero based
8576573plus. fun fact. this was the very first mlp story ive ever written. i just submitted it after The True Me
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cool still i hope you make more sequels in this timeline and so what a superhero is not bad plus you build a character that wasn't op and gave him a great personality you even stated he STILL needed help from the ponies to beat the timberwolf army in my books thats how a superhero should be like in any fanfic not just with the ponies
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well, technically, he just needed celestias sword to give him that extra boost. ps, im reading your story right now. youve been a brony way longer than me. i became on in april
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thank you but you might not like it not very many people did so you might not like and yep what was your first episode or movie that made you want to join the herd
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it was actually readin some of the fanfictions made by other bronies. but what sucks? my parents dont know im one. most people at my school do, but not my parents. im writing on my xbox one to speak
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but i can kinda see why people didnt like it. but it kinda started like mine. rushing into introductions. not very descrptive. a whole bunch of crap
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yep i have more chapters to write with a lot more character development but i stopped because i got discouraged with all the hate and i too am using my xboxone but it takes 5 times longer to write my fic so until i get a proper computer i can't upload my other 50 chapters the reason i'm writing again is because a few of my friends are supporting me as well as my sister
8576679
if you want to be friends on live my gamertag is the same as my username here minus the second 30 in my username
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yeah, but your lucky. you have irl people to support you. Me? I have to keep an ear open at all times just to make sure my parents dont catch me writing mlp crap. Plus i don't have any irl friends, let alone other bronies friends. plus no smart siblings to speak of. my brother is 4 and he cant talk
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i would like to be an irl friend to you if you want that's why i asked you to be my friend on live thats why i offered you my gamertag for a friend request on live
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not what i meant. I have friends online. But irl friends? Like friends at school or that live near me? none. nothing. nada. im like hannibal lector. nobody wants to be near me. dont understand why.
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ps. username - damyonthecool
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that's sad i would like to meet you in real life even give you a fluttershy hug but that sucks because i live in winnipeg,mb in canada i don't know where you hail from
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same country diffrent province. also, im getting more of a pegasister fan vibe than brony vibe off you for some reason.(msg through xbox pls. i dont want to overflow my comment section with my life
That was interesting. You and I started out pretty similarly but ended up taking two different paths. My dashie fanfic received a lot of dislikes at first as well, but after a year I polished it with my newly developed writing skills and it hasn't gotten a dislike in a good three years. It may never reach the ratio that I'd prefer (currently 30 likes to 11 dislikes) but that's okay, not to mention besides my point... Just wanted to let you know that you aren't alone out there with this sort of thing. If you're still into all of this stuff, please don't be afraid to keep trying. I was lucky enough to get a proofreader for my stories and I learned a lot from him. Maybe you could use the same. After that story, I wrote several shorter versions, and they were received much better and even made the popular list a few times. Anything is possible is what I'm trying to get at. Hope to hear from you some day :)
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thanks dude. honestly i like the first few chapters of this fanfiction still. maybe not to my current level. but the ideas behind it are still rock solid. when he gets put in the everfree forest though is when it admittedly goes downhill
Not bad, my man. That was a good one 👍