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It was barely 14 C less than a week ago, which is what makes this so unbearable. This is supposed to be the land of rain and no summers. What the hell is this crap?
Not sure what to do with Equis, because the intelligence side of things is the part I could easily get wrong, seeing as I know very little about how rl intelligence agencies really work, which I suspect is something they like to maintain.
I love how everyone assumes the Filly is Fleur daughter now. She really should get her out of Canterlot though, send her to school in I don't know...Ponyville? I could see the Filly being good friends with the CMC's. They might even make a balefire bomb in the clubhouse.
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But mind control's already a thing in pony land, so... not sure what benefit there would be to researching it here.
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I could totally see the balefire bomb being a result of trying to make instant toast though.
8243716 ah, but if you can't bring the Filly to Ponyville, you can bring the CMC's to Canterlot! I can easily see Applebloom and Sweetie Belle showing up in day out and demandung answers from Celest is on where there sisters are. And getting passed off to Fleur to answer there questions.
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Sweetie saw Rarity and Spike being kidnapped, and Applebloom the same with Aj, with an extra helping of Big Mac getting stabbed. Then the possibility of war is announced right after their reasonably important sisters are kidnapped. I think they're more than old enough, and smart enough, to join the dots. The trick is to stop them doing something stupid.
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Glad you like it. At the very least I can say the grammar should be better in this one.