How can a stallion be so lucky to have found a mare so perfect? Beautiful and caring.
A mare so eagerly helping him with his preparations as a teacher, creating the perfect illusion of a classroom to practice with. It almost feels like he's teaching for an invisible crowd.
But every day his body feels so much more heavy, his mind so much more blurred.
Jesus, this is perfect.
Yikes...
This is really good.
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Glad you like it.
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Thanks!
Good story, but what do you mean by harvested/
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Left open for the reader to decide upon.
Personally I think of it as when a captured pony stuck within a hive is put into one of those cocoons while getting drained of magic and love, until nothing remains but an empty shell. A dead battery.
Oh ok. I have my own ideas behind that meaning, but I like your ideas.
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As said, it's left pretty open for the reader to have their own ideas too
You definitely nailed the creep factor for headcannon about what the Changelings can do to ponies.
Nice job
Thank you kindly ^^