Chrysalis fan may I be, but I have enough hate for this story at this point to give it a dislike.

And that's even if we skip over all it's flaws which are a plenty and more than enough on their own.

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Same here, wow that story is so bad.
I though its only was first chapter to get over introduction and go with the real story but no. A lot of problem starting from pacing to even editing of text itself.

Oh come on now I think it's gray story, the changelings get to live in Equestria and I give it a 10

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Yeah, a little exposition to set up the setting is one thing. So far this is almost nothing but, though!

Don't TELL us Sunbutt, Moonie, and Chryssie came to an understanding. Write the actual scene and SHOW it to us! That could be a chapter all itself.

Some repetitive words, a broader vocabulary would brighten the story some, though I believe this would have offered more to the reader if there were accounts of Chrysalis's past failures such as other invasions or what lead to starvation in great detail. As for Shining Armor, not too much of a fan of his dialogue.