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Ringtael


Don't waste time on reading this, you got stories to explore.

Comments ( 18 )

Wow... Well, this was sad. Everypony against Anon, it was so hard on him. But I can say I enjoyed this story, even if it isn't the kind of thing I'd normally read.

This was odd.

Should have Max tell Celestia this story

8139169 I figured I needed a break from writing porn and my main story. It WAS going to be funny.

8139177 I don't see how I could sensibly work it in

I actually want some kind of continuation, as it was something a bit different to what I see normally on the front page.
That and it was a good read too.

This was funny as shit, bud. I'm proud of you. You're doing god's work here.

I mean....Why didnt he just point out the fact that if she didnt want him she could have just kicked the hell outta him with her hooves....Last time I checked Hooves hurt like hell when you get kicked in the cocktail with them. Im just saying. And if he was friends with Princess Luna why didnt he just let her read his mind with her Dream walking abilities and see the truth of the matter. And why does every HumanXStallion Gay Romance seem to Always involve Braeburn? I Mean Theres Tons Of Other Stallions....Two of my favs are Cresent Moon and Doctor Hooves. I suppose for This particular story you need an Apple but theres A Bunch of them...Like Apple Cinnamon. Hes even said to "Smell Sweet" hes a perfect candidate for a HxS Gay Romance if you ask me. Lolz! Anyway interesting story, I found it more ridiculous than Tragic. I believe it falls in my category of morbidly funny. Lolz!

8140355 Luna became more interested in the female human, the truth of the matter was never an issue for her, and it's a part of the reason why Anon didn't go after her.

I have no idea who the fuck Apple Cinnamon is. I haven't actually watched the show in years

I was hoping to give some sick puppies a chuckle or two. Glad I could deliver

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I see. Apple Cinnamon is one of the Apples Cousins. He flies in on the Airship in the Apple Family Reunion. I like Airships which is how I even bothered finding out about him.

Past that....Im Not Sick....Or a Puppy....Im just Dark And Morbid. *Looks At My Own Name ((Rainbow DJ Pony))*
Ignore The First Part Of My Name.....LOLZ!!

8140432 DJ stands for Dark and Jorbid

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BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!:rainbowlaugh:
OH NO SOMEPONY FIGURED IT OUT!!:pinkiecrazy:
What Ever Will I Do Now That My Secrets Out!!:trixieshiftright:

So a dark crack fic? Eh not my thing.

Felt more like a story outline than a story. Not that it would have to be longer to make it more of a story. Just the way it was written I guess.

Nice fic, I always appreciate a nice revenge fic rather than some stupid contrived forgiveness bullshit.

Would have been even better if he got away with it.

I gave her the last smile I would ever give, coated in red as I choked and gagged. She never realized what I did until I was already on my way to the grave.

Am I the only one who cant figure out how he killed himself? I feel like a dunce but Im absolutely lost.

As far as the story goes, this is a very good short. Well done.

It invokes the emotions the reader needs to empathize with the character and that is hard to do with a short.

Monk
“Shhh, it’s ok. The crotches won’t get you.” - BobAlcove

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Bit off his own tongue.

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