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JaydexTheShadowKnight
I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?
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Oh my YES!
And how does Shining Armor feel about all of this?
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Why don't you read it and find out? it's explained in there.
ps. good story 🙂
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No offence, but that hardly an explanation. Especially considering that in canon she never have any problems with him.
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No offense but nearly nothing on this site is canon. He wrote the story because there are so few cadencexhuman stories. A good argument but a failed one. -_-
ITS SO FLUFFY!!!!
its not to bad.... a stronger explanation of why shining is not in the picture would have made this better IMO but I loved it none the less.
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Author said that he put an explanation why Shining and Cadance are not together here. Problem is that there simple no explanation but some short hand-waiving that literally don't explain anything at all.
If author really don't want to explain anything - fine. But saying that there is explanation when in reality there is not...
Not bad. I think for me the overly sweet theme kinda made it lose its sweetness. Just repeating "I love you" and "You're the best thing that happened to me" kinda makes it more commonplace and lose its effect. Actions speak louder than words, and you had plenty of good descriptions of them displaying that affection. I'd just tone it down with the dialogue or maybe change it up (more reminiscing on the past, like the first time they made love?). I dunno, that's just my two sense. You've got 50x more followers than I do.
I do totally agree with you, not enough sweet Cadance fics.
Edit: Forget what I said. Congrats on getting Featured.
Speaking of classics:
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Another great song of Rick Astley's! I had this song in mind for Cadence too.
And to think you were actually worried about this one Jay.
It's kind of funny now. 
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It's a simple 2 chapter story. A ship to fill in the space of ships for cadencexhuman! Does it really need a fuckin explanation.
*caveman voice* He eyes sparkle, he shaman. I think you mean her there Jay.
I couldn't help myself.
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What a rare sight for a Cadance fic. I've often said that the kinkiest shit Cadance and Shining Armor stories are the ones where they are a happily married couple faithful to each other, since that's rarely the case!
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If anyone had to find a typo like that, I'm glad it was you. 
Naturally, you made me laugh. And yes, I suppose you couldn't resist your little sarcasm bit. Either way, it made me chuckle. 
Fixed!
Love it! This site needs more Cadence x Human stories. :D
we need many many more stories like this... of true and devoted love between a human and a pony......
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Get used to me being a wise ass clown Jay, it's what I do. That and forget things.
Also when I looked at my little scene spoof I realized that I had made an error of my own. It's fixed now.
Well it's Wednesday.
Oh and nice play on words in the title by the way. I really like it.
Yeah, that pretty much sums this up.
Whoo boi, dis gon b gud
I think this story accompished what you set out to do. Its a great love story. I thiink that the complaints about the dialog is interesting, we really need to take a good look at the amount of time they have been together. In many relationships it starts out very sweet, and as the relationship matures it tones down. Thats not always the case but I think it might be in this case. I think the important thing to focus on is the message the author is trying to bring across in the story which is love is universal. It doesn't matter who you are or who you fall in love with, what is important is your happiness with that person. I would love to see a sequal set many years down the road as they adjust to the life they have chosen to live and how their love has matured. I think it can be just as heartwarming.
Generally, I'm not a fan of 2nd Person POVs, but at least you had the skill and decency to NOT use the ubiquitous "Anon" as the character's name. Kudos for that alone!
And it's a pretty good clop fic.
I liked that story!! Was nicely written and the clop part was good.
Only con point: Sometimes the fluff between them both became way to cheesy at least in my opinion.
8261944
Tell me about it. I was so sad when I found so few Cadence x Human stories, let alone only a few good ones.
8262016
I can't speak for other writers, but stories like this are the kind of thing I love to write. So I'll be happy to write more. And not just starring Cadence.
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Where did you find that clip. I searched for one and couldn't find one that had those two alone.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. The next sequel I'm planning won't be years down the road, in fact it will pick up right where this one left off. But, I will certainly keep such a sequel in mind. It would make for an enjoyable story.
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Due to the lack of Cadence x Human stories on here, I had to fight through a few 2nd person ones that called the human "Anon". I don't know why so many just call him Anon. I adapted my 2nd person styling from writers like Crowley and SwiperTheFox. They did pretty much the same as me and found places that you could infer someone said your name so "Anon" or an actual name didn't need to be used.
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I tend to try to keep the fluff a little more reigned in, knowing that it can be a turn off to some, but with Cadence as my star, I figured the Princess of Love would be more prone to acting extra sweet and lovey-dovey.
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Well you can rest assured that I have plenty of material in the works to continue this story between Cadence and her human. I'm working out the details for a sequel that will pick up where this one left off. And secondly, I have already started outlining for a prequel that will show how he and Cadence met and became a couple. I might even add bonus chapters to it that depict the first romantic kiss and the first time they made love. But that will be down the road, and probably after I do a sequel.
By the way, I read you story, "A different kind of distortion". It was a little smutty for my tastes, but I still found it entertaining nonetheless. Kudos for writing a Cadence x Human story. There are too few of them on here.
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if this is so...... then i most humbly beg a request of you...... please.... please write one about Trixie... the girl has been through so much it is high time that she is shown some love
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Trade secret bro... Not really lol. I just typed in "It's so fluffy I'm gonna die!"
8266669 Yeah. I only wish more here would take that road in their stories. They wouldn't be so cringeworthy if they did.
I'm so glad I've read this story. This site needs more Human x Cadence stories. <3
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OMG, that's a story I've had on the back burner for so long. I even started drafting it a few years ago, but with so many other stories in the works I never got around to it and would really like to. You know, I really think it may be time for Trixie to come back into the limelight. Now the question is which style would you enjoy seeing her in better? 2nd Person or 3rd Person? I haven't got a problem with either. And it will still be a little while till I get to it, but I can always get some more outlining and early drafting done.
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Well, I can't speak for the other writers, but I have no plans to change my 2nd person styling. It was hard to deal with the ubiquitous use of "Anon" in this one story, but I was so desperate for what I was hoping would be a really good human x Cadence story, I just muscled through it.
8267919
That's how I felt when I only found a small handful of Human x Cadence stories and that's considered there's a group for such stories. Thanks for reading! ^^
8266767
I should have kept my search a bit more basic then. I included Agne's name in my search.
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hmm either is good.... i just think that it is time for Trixie to finally meet someone whom she falls in love with and who loves her back.... or now that i think about it.... Zecora is also due for a love story
Taking notes as I read through.
The first thing to leap out at me is the idea of a blacksmith using wood to fire his forge.
It won't get anywhere near hot enough to melt metal with just wood. There's a reason charcoal maker became its own entire occupation, back when smithing first started becoming a trade central to keeping a town or village from going under. ;) Although given Equestria's use of steam engines, they may have started mining coal, which is what caused charcoal to be relegated poorer areas or use as a cooking material. Mmmmm, charcoaley smokiness...
...I'm a pegasus. There are no "zee magicks." This is "zee science!" And maybe a bit of history.
You heard it here, first, folks! Ponies consider toes an erogenous zone!
Pinkie, you don't have toes.
What a loving time together. Worth the wait!
Loved it! It was sweeter than sugar! Props to you my friend!
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! In time, I'm planning on expanding upon this with a sequel and most likely a prequel as well.
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A sequel and a prequel? Oh boy. Is the sequel gonna involve maybe "familiy" time?
The prequel though, I'm curious how you'll develop that and what it will entale.
I'll be awaiting the next instalment.
for shame, seriously
Not simply the mark that was hit, but a proper bulls-eye!
Or, you know, I just happen to think so... 
8276400
I know for a fact that when you make that prequel, it's gonna skyrocket and have such an amazing storyline behind it. All of your stories have the best storylines behind them
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I know it may come off as a bit overly sugary, but given that my starring mare is Cadence, it didn't seem farfetched to me that the Princess of Love would be overly affectionate and lovey-dovey, not to mention more prone to using terms of endearment or expressing herself in a way that might make her and her reciprocating human (the reader) seem like hopeless romantics.
Yeah, that was one of my concerns, development. Mostly, this was an introduction story and if you paid close attention during the hair brushing scene, I was setting up some potential conflict issues with Cadence's business out of town on Sunday. I'm still determining what I want to have happen. Plus there are still the events of the rest of the evening and Saturday to consider. I've got some ideas there that should flesh out more detailing between the two. It's also my hopes to show case how these two realized they'd be a good fit in the prequel. I know there is plenty of potential for development their. I'm just going to take my time working it out so it won't disappoint. That, and I have a number of other projects that need attention first. I just wanted to see if a more loving Cadence x Human story, minus the Shining Armor complications would be something that would appeal to readers on here.
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the love/sex scene. As that was the part of the story I poured over and put the greatest amount of care into. In fact I retooled it several times, and even did a rewrite of a few parts as my earlier attempts at the love scene just weren't to my satisfaction.
I'll be happy to have you along for my future Cadence stories. Also, I like your avatar image. Any chance you could share a link of where I can find the complete image of Cadence. My Cadence picture folder can never have enough pictures of Cady in it.
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Glad to see you commented. I always enjoy getting feedback from you!
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Thank you for the vote of confidence, I'll do my best not to disappoint.
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So far, from what I know, you have never disappointed this reader. And you are yet to disappoint. Still, you'll do great bro
I got to say this was a sweet story to read. It's always nice to read stories that aren't about the canon ship but a different ship. There is something about human x pony stories that get me excited to read.
This was one of the fluffiest, if not the fluffiest story I've ever read, and I mean that in the best way possible. It's not merely a clopfic, and the sex is gently massaged into the story, backed up by plenty of genuine love, and it doesn't come out of the blue like in many clopfics. I'm also glad, like you said in the description, that you didn't write Cadence as a vulgar slut. I have also seen some stories where she was like that, all the while cheating on Shining Armor, and that just turned me off and away. While I don't mind some ponies being written that way, for me, Cadence is sacred.
And thanks for introducing me to that Rick Astley song; it's now one of my favorites!
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Thank you, I was hoping there were others out there that shared my feelings about Cadence. And it's sad how often she's not kept, as you said "sacred". I like that. And I agree with you 110%, Cadence is very special. And thank you for the informative feedback on the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I'm glad I could share Rich Astley's song with you and the others reading this story. Have a good one!
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I’d say the same thing, but with significantly more profanity.
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So, you are also very sarcastic at times. I just wrote that because I knew Jay would laugh really, that was the point.