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Locky


wtf are u doin here, get off my board normies reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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And consensual sex in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation

What? How dare you write this filth?!

8202219
Well, I did add the dark tag...

I'll also leave this here before the comment box gets flooded (if it happens)
Should I try to use the past tense for my next fics? I read mixed opinions about these kinda things, so having 'real' numbers would be nice.
http://www.strawpoll.me/13085231

Dan

Watched.

Comment posted by Rustic_King deleted Jun 1st, 2017

It's dark but not too bad.

I wonder if this will result in another Little Satyr?

Not gonna lie lyra have some creepy moments but still not I need an adult levels of dark :pinkiecrazy:

Ok, so my thoughts.
Abduction=bad, so appropriately marked Dark for that. The fact that the only magical coercion done was to get the protagonist erect again, not so bad.
She did, yet didn't, force the protagonist. They fooled around a bit on the tram, so I would say it's all good. The protagonist clearly enjoying the whole thing.
Now... I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

First chapter is pure smut, second will be all warm and fuzzy.

I'm taking this to mean once she gets the initial oestrus drive cooled down, she's going to be much less "crazy" and more "cuddly." I eagerly await to see the cuddly side, as this was an excellent chapter alone.

8203532
Good, that's what I was aiming for

8203594
Yeah, I didn't want to add the dark tag since it would scare people away, but I couldn't just submit that without it, knowing how sensible some peeps are.

And thanks for the support guys.

wew the dark tag threw me off.

8204103
yeah, fuck that, the story shouldn't need a dark tag
feels bad that I missed the feature box because of it, but oh well

8205830
ty friend

8205929 FeelsBadMan Indeed. Its pretty gud.

Well, so much for not believing that mares in heat can be evil :rainbowlaugh:

Great read though, looking forward to more!

*<>* best Lyra X human clopfic we've ever passed by 15/10

While I do like this story, I do have to ask if anyone else feels that the human in this story's IQ level is abnormally low? I mean that halfway through the story and the human still has absolutely no clue what the heck is going on.

Again, don't get me wrong, I do like this story, but I do have to say that "Mister Dumb as a Box of Rocks" complete obliviousness became a real distraction and kept pulling me out of the story.

The Monk

8280291
I don't know, how did you come to this conclusion?

To be honest, I believe I got this part right.
The protagonist is shocked at first, then tries to test the waters, slowly, and then goes with the flow. And it's not like he has that many lines so... yeah.
But do tell me what's on your mind

8281284
No offense intended. Its just my personal view on how that part of the story came across to me.

The Monk

8281887
Oh no, I didn't take it badly or anything don't worry.
I just need heads up as to why you feel that way.

Lovely! One of my favorite portrayals of Lyra!

8304807
Who doesn't love cute rapey mares?
Thanks

8304897
i would like to read the next chapter please

8598188
It's somewhere on the somewhat high priority list :twilightoops:
I'll try to have it done before new year hits, along with another couple fics I've been working on.

8598266
sounds like a plan tho if I may sugest if lyra does get zebabies can they be centaurs they are not enough stories that have centaurs

8598276
Nah, satyrs are just way too cute, they have the best of both world and it's not like there's that many fics with satyrs out there anyway. And centaurs have too many shortcomings.
Not that it matters, I don't think I'll go farther than the impregnation part for Lyra's arc, or at least it won't be included in 'more' and it'll be just a comedy sequel about auntie bonbon being a bitch to Anon but still loving the kid or something like that, idk.

But I did start working on a AnonxponyShimshamxcentaurTrixie herd green a few months back, so maybe you can keep an eye out for that one, but it's just silly smut with barely any plot though.
We'll see :twilightsheepish:

8599016
I would read that but yea they are not enough mixed monster stories out there and I have been working to try and change that but it's not a easy task

After reading this, makes me want all the pons to go extinct.

8599016
High priority list huh?

Dan

Please continue.

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