I've never eaten licorice before, and I'm sure as hell not going to start after this. It would make sense that only Pinkie would be able to abuse the natural goodness of candy that way.
There's an interesting question arising with Twilight's dream watching: If she, herself, features in one of these dream, will that mess up her "riding" the dreamer? Now, I'd say that any Twilight encountered would only be dream personification of what the dreamer sees her as- that shouldn't cause too much trouble. If, however, her magic gets confused about covering two "Twilights", that might become problematic.
find your happy place Twilight! find your happy place!
Somewhat curious now if the spell is perhaps influencing the TYPE of dreams she is getting.... and curious what would happen with her own dreams.... Especially with all the different kinks and fetishes she has been exposed to now.
Well notably I really wanted liquorice before this story too, but I want it more now; I also want some toys, but not made of liquorice, liquorice is melty.
Master-slave, incest, futanari, and now tentacles.... what will be the fetish for Rarity? I have no idea how far this will go. Not sure I want to know, but dammit if I can't stop reading.
I saw where Pinkie's dream was headed the moment I read about licorice, and I was definitely convinced when I read 'she bounced head-first into the fields and was greeted by curious, tickling tips of black licorice as they rubbed and prodded at her curiously' I had very unfortunately eaten some licorice right before reading this chapter too...
When i realized, that the next pony will be pinkie pie, i started to paint myself the worst nightmares ever. y'know, pinkamenia diane pie - gory and mindblowing cruelties. after the third line in red i see, she was in the sugar lands. thank you on the one hand for giving me an fic about an happy pinkie. after the 10th line in red i had to pic up my freakkin lower jaw from the floor. to start laughing HARD.
thank you.
btw, " If looks could kill, Twilight's narrow, piercing gaze would have skinned Spike alive, then ground him up and made dragon burgers out of him. "
You ALL failed the test. You poor, sick, deluded freaks...
This prolific author obviously inserted an amazingly sensual nugget of gooey greatness actually reminiscent of the source material this sexual bastardization derives from in the form of Lovably Lonely Luna's meeting with Sexually Shocking (Yet) Still Sunny-Souled Fluttershy to see if anyone was paying attention. I, for one, felt my body react mightily when I encountered that part. My muscles bunched up, my eyes widened, and liquids began squishing around in my body. I read with a fervor until I could take no more, and I gushed salty wetness all over my keyboard.
FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC, YOU GUISE! SHE'S SO LONELY! NO MORE TEARS, PLEASE!
Aw, God, I'm crying AGAIN! It's EVERYWHERE! It just keeps pumping OUT and OUT, SQUIRT after SQUIRT! My hands are COVERED! Why is it so salty!?
I'm going out to buy some Kleenex and a practical guidebook on how to better deal with these uncontrollable urges. Also, I have the strangest craving for licorice...
"The licorice strips were clearly happy to see Pinkie Pie as well. Several of them wrapped themselves around her four legs, slowly lifting the mare into the air as they coiled around her legs, much to Pinkie's delight. "
I was eating twizzlers at the time. I now regret it. Now, about this chapter... Fluttershy? That I kind of saw coming. That idea is fairly popular. Applecest? Not nearly as popular, but still very much so. Thus, foreseeable. Dash and Do? Little out of left field, but to understandable. This? This is one of those little things that shouldn't surprise me. It really shouldn't. And yet, somehow, no matter how much sense it makes in hind site, it does.
"Note to self, she thought, never buy licorice at Sugar Cube Corner. You don't know where it's been." "I wish I can have some hard licorice in my mouth right now!" *Claps slowly* You sir, deserve another cookie.
Alright that is the greatest thing I have ever seen "But then we'd go into a gingerbread house and find a stallion made out of vanilla ice cream and we could totally rub ourselves against him to make him a Klondike stallion, and-" I am a Klondike stallion and I would get to be rubbed between Twilight and Pinkie.
Locks, not Lochs. Also, way to throw a curveball Yuko. The first three were understandable in some way, and you started this one out as "Oh hey, random pinkie dream. In friggin candy land. Maybe this will be different."
Nope nope nope nope, I was wrong and I LOVE IT when that happens!
Funny Enough like quite a few of the other commenters, I was eating red licorice myself while reading this, and also funny enough, it started tasting better the more I read. I am loving your writing style and imagination the more I read.
I've never eaten licorice before, and I'm sure as hell not going to start after this. It would make sense that only Pinkie would be able to abuse the natural goodness of candy that way.
I couldnt stop laughing during pinkies sex scene bravo sir bravo
Well.....I'll never look at liquorice quite the same way anymore
I find myself craving liqourice sticks...
What will Rarity's fetish be hm?
So Pinkie's a confectionophile. Oh, why not?
There's an interesting question arising with Twilight's dream watching: If she, herself, features in one of these dream, will that mess up her "riding" the dreamer? Now, I'd say that any Twilight encountered would only be dream personification of what the dreamer sees her as- that shouldn't cause too much trouble. If, however, her magic gets confused about covering two "Twilights", that might become problematic.
do you go into my dreams or something....?
twilight has some fucked up friends.
I was eating twizzlers during this, and not just any kind of twizzlers, cherry pull and peel twizzlers....
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I've been wondering that myself. Maybe the author is saving that little nugget for when Twilight meets Celestia!
find your happy place Twilight! find your happy place!
Somewhat curious now if the spell is perhaps influencing the TYPE of dreams she is getting.... and curious what would happen with her own dreams.... Especially with all the different kinks and fetishes she has been exposed to now.
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is it really tentacle "rape", though?
I ate licorice before this... I think I'll always see pinkie getting wrecked with 3 penis looking licorice whenever I eat licorice
I really really want some liquorice now!
Well notably I really wanted liquorice before this story too, but I want it more now; I also want some toys, but not made of liquorice, liquorice is melty.
Master-slave, incest, futanari, and now tentacles.... what will be the fetish for Rarity?
I have no idea how far this will go. Not sure I want to know, but dammit if I can't stop reading.
My comment is simply my name
I saw where Pinkie's dream was headed the moment I read about licorice, and I was definitely convinced when I read 'she bounced head-first into the fields and was greeted by curious, tickling tips of black licorice as they rubbed and prodded at her curiously'
I had very unfortunately eaten some licorice right before reading this chapter too...
When i realized, that the next pony will be pinkie pie, i started to paint myself the worst nightmares ever. y'know, pinkamenia diane pie - gory and mindblowing cruelties. after the third line in red i see, she was in the sugar lands. thank you on the one hand for giving me an fic about an happy pinkie. after the 10th line in red i had to pic up my freakkin lower jaw from the floor. to start laughing HARD.
thank you.
btw,
"
If looks could kill, Twilight's narrow, piercing gaze would have skinned Spike alive, then ground him up and made dragon burgers out of him. "
that line had it xD
Nice Hard Licorice
929835 Ever had a Twizzler? If you have, you've had licorice.
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931722 I keep waiting for you to say "Here's your sign"
You ALL failed the test. You poor, sick, deluded freaks...
This prolific author obviously inserted an amazingly sensual nugget of gooey greatness actually reminiscent of the source material this sexual bastardization derives from in the form of Lovably Lonely Luna's meeting with Sexually Shocking (Yet) Still Sunny-Souled Fluttershy to see if anyone was paying attention. I, for one, felt my body react mightily when I encountered that part. My muscles bunched up, my eyes widened, and liquids began squishing around in my body. I read with a fervor until I could take no more, and I gushed salty wetness all over my keyboard.
FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC, YOU GUISE! SHE'S SO LONELY! NO MORE TEARS, PLEASE!
Aw, God, I'm crying AGAIN! It's EVERYWHERE! It just keeps pumping OUT and OUT, SQUIRT after SQUIRT! My hands are COVERED! Why is it so salty!?
I'm going out to buy some Kleenex and a practical guidebook on how to better deal with these uncontrollable urges. Also, I have the strangest craving for licorice...
"The licorice strips were clearly happy to see Pinkie Pie as well. Several of them wrapped themselves around her four legs, slowly lifting the mare into the air as they coiled around her legs, much to Pinkie's delight. "
Read up till here so far...
Liquorice tentacle rape senses tingling...
I'm a big tentacle fan!
I thank you so much for this chapter!
Wat?
Only Pinkie Pie can how erotic dreams within the confines of Candy Land.
Brilliant and really funny chapter! I really liked the dream sequence.
And thats when molestia said "I CAME!" for the fourth time that week
I was eating twizzlers at the time. I now regret it.
Now, about this chapter... Fluttershy? That I kind of saw coming. That idea is fairly popular. Applecest? Not nearly as popular, but still very much so. Thus, foreseeable. Dash and Do? Little out of left field, but to understandable. This? This is one of those little things that shouldn't surprise me. It really shouldn't. And yet, somehow, no matter how much sense it makes in hind site, it does.
NO. NEVER AGAIN WILL I EAT LIQUORICE WHILE READING PINKIE CLOP.
SERIOUSLY, NEVER.
DAMN YOU ONCE AGAIN
a me stallion?!?!
"Note to self, she thought, never buy licorice at Sugar Cube Corner. You don't know where it's been." "I wish I can have some hard licorice in my mouth right now!"
*Claps slowly* You sir, deserve another cookie.
Alright that is the greatest thing I have ever seen
"But then we'd go into a gingerbread house and find a stallion made out of vanilla ice cream and we could totally rub ourselves against him to make him a Klondike stallion, and-"
I am a Klondike stallion and I would get to be rubbed between Twilight and Pinkie.
Locks, not Lochs. Also, way to throw a curveball Yuko. The first three were understandable in some way, and you started this one out as "Oh hey, random pinkie dream. In friggin candy land. Maybe this will be different."
Nope nope nope nope, I was wrong and I LOVE IT when that happens!
Funny Enough like quite a few of the other commenters, I was eating red licorice myself while reading this, and also funny enough, it started tasting better the more I read. I am loving your writing style and imagination the more I read.
Licorice fields? Oh boy...
EDIT:I'm back, and it's just as bad as I thought it would be, but why am I the only one who's not surprised?
I... ugh. Why am I okay with this? I should not be okay with this.
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i agree completely. especially with how... THIS SHOULDN'T MAKE SENSE THAT PINKIE'S DREAM WOULD BE THIS! but it does make sense to me...
You know, I hate licorice. Can't stand the stuff.
Why do I want some right now?
(Reads Chapter and gets through Pinkie’s dream)
I am on the drugs, I AM ON ALL OF THE DRUGS!
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Because, technically, it wasn’t licorice. It was tentacles made of licorice. Big difference.