gross that chapter was just wrong
i know its my own morals but their still morals and to me that is still fucked up idc what you say
AND I CAN UNDERSTAND ONE WEIRD DREAM BUT AT THE END SHE PRACTICALLY SAID SHE WAS GOING TO DO IT GAH IM GOING TO BE SICK
AND YES IM RAGING WITH A GOOD REASON

Not the biggest fan of Applecest, but this was still fairly hot. Can't wait for other chapters.

WHY

I liked the second chapter, but I didn't feel it was as perverted as the first... I liked Twilight's reaction and eagerly await more!
It's a lot of fun to see her freak out, and I wonder if we will get to see her dreams?

Keep it up.

As soon as I saw the chapter I already knew what it was going to be about lol. Fluttershy fucks a bear

is it weird that I don't like incest, but only princest between princess celestia and princess Luna???

I'm not bothered by the content in chapter 2, it is fiction after all, but I still don't like it as much as chapter 1.

If you want to write all the ponies with odd kinks, go right ahead, but you may be straying into a writer's trap here. It's a problem that's always plagued writers like us. We want to create something new and original, so we deviate form the norm.

Here's where the problem starts.

Not everyone's going to like change. On that same token, no one wants the exact same every time. You need to change the material to keep people interested, but change too much, and you end up with something completely unrecognizable. Be careful with your writing from here on out; you're straying quite far from established character traits.

Awesome work man!
and, btw...
fluttershy and a bear?
hollycaw...
Don't know if zoo or inter-racial!

Not the biggest fan of incest related content but it was a very well written story and a hot scene.
You can count on me to keep watching for more updates and before everypony gets turned off by this one chapter remember this: being bronies makes us a lot more openminded than most, so just go with the flow.
Also, Buttsecks

Okay, why does it go to black every so often? Am I missing something hear?

Calling it right now that she accidentally enchanted it to give both the wearer and the one whose dreams are being invaded a wet dream when it is used.

Um wait um Applejack is ok with and and um Twilight saw um ok my brain went

888081 No, she said she has tried before.

Sorry, this is it.

Can't read this, it's simply too...
Pardon my choice of words, but it's disgusting to say the least

God No....

that was the best Applecest (yes I like it) fic I have ever read in my life.

I dont like clop, but one of my clopper friends told me that this had a good story line. So my solution, anything in red text kill with fire and continue.

Two words for you. ME GUSTS

*starts reading* "This should be interesting."
*gets to dream* "No... no nononononoononnonoonoooooooooooooooooo

My brain it hurts. Oh and DAMN YOU

Oh god... Why...

Eventually, Applejack smacked her brother on the flank with a hind hoof, still smiling ear to ear...

With a nod, Big Mac leaned over and kissed Applejack on the forehead.

Well, I know what train I just boarded...

Finishes Story: Eyup. But meh, well written and a touch of forbidden love is always nice.

>How he managed to do measure his strength
wat ._.

I really don't mind the incest, it is a dream after all. If this scene came out of nowhere in a normal clopfic I would be like. lol

I am highly enjoying the series so far. It is well written and the dreams are very arousing. Here is hoping that we get to see the result of Big Mac coming home in the next chapter. One note though regarding your writing of incest. When You state that their foal would be abnormal if they did conceive, that isn't exactly true. If there has been no history of incest in their family, then it would take 3 or 4 generations of non stop incest for abnormalities to show up, the gene pool cannot be that diluted by first generation incest.

See normally, if this wasn't in a dream...................... Me: "NONONONONONONO" We all have a weird dream now and again.

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The two of them walked out of the room, giggling softly to one another. Applejack looked back inside for one moment, a small grin on her face. Maybe she’d leave his bed in her room tonight. She was going to be making him feel welcome when he got home anyway.

Do with this what you will.

Of course, its slippery, thick nature made it a great lubricant. 

No, just no... I remember fapping with shampoo back when I was like 13 and didn't know how shit works, I can tell you for a fact that this is a painful combination.... and not in the good way.

(Reads chapter... steps away for a minute)

(Inhale)

”INSEST!”