• Member Since 24th Apr, 2012
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It isn't easy. Anypony who says it is would be a liar. But Rainbow Dash hadn't seen him in so long... so why is it so hard to just... to just say goodbye?

Why can't she just move on?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 21 )

Ya know, it may not be all that sad... but it was written for myself... so meh.

That was pretty good. I'm not a fan of these kind of things, but you drew me in.

882130 Thanks. Just something that I felt I should write down.

A very touching story. Reminds me of my own grandfather, actually. Well done.

882686 eh, ya know. Stuff.

883137 LIKE MY SAILBOAT!

883188 Oh nothing, thought I'd lighten the mood.

Carry on, carry on.

883196 uh.......................................okay. im gonna go finish off some more of the 467 fics on my read later now.

wow...that's :fluttercry: lovely! I love your stories, Church!:twilightsmile::raritywink:

I never knew my grandfather...this made me kinda sad:pinkiesad2:

883215 Dear Celestia of Equestria... Good luck to you and God speed

885011 Haha, thanks for following along on my stories! I always love to see what people think :pinkiehappy:

You are awesome

885171

Wow, thank you! You are, too! Could you read some of my stories? I'd love to hear your opinion. And I really love your stories:pinkiehappy: Your awesome!:trixieshiftright::yay::twilightsmile::raritywink: /)(\

Erm. Hate to say it but first chapter... AJ is Honesty, not Loyalty.

I hate to say it because it's a small and irrelevant mistake but it's there.

889895 No, no! Thanks so much, that was a stupid mistake... did it really say that?

Edit: fixed. Thanks, silly mistake! I do appreciate it!

889906

Not really stupid, given the Loyalty/Honesty debate Dash and Jack have in fanon. They've often traded elements for the purposes of humor, and there's at least one write up examining the relationship.

889930 Indeed... but it did say that Dash was the element of loyalty like... a couple of sentences above it :twilightblush:

Ah well. Those two do seem to go hoof in hoof.

Nice job, i finally got a chance to read this one and its looking pretty good! Keep it up please! :rainbowkiss:

927468 Actually, that was it...

Why does it say incomplete?

That was not supposed to happen.

But thanks for liking it...

Pretty mushy but i still like it :ajsmug:

Aww I actually cried…no seriously I have tears in my eyes.

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