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DeshLune
I'm a simple person who dislikes very little and hates even less; I like (or even love) a few things: reading, gaming, Pinkie Pie, and writing; I even take story requests~!
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That was awesome Deshy it was worth the wait.
Now sequel? We can get Vinyl in on this too.
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Thanks, Anstca. Rewrite was a big help. And I'm glad it was worthy of your time.
Possibly...
Um... I'll check this out later.
8351713
You sure? It is clop. There is story, but still clop.
8351718 Well... considering I've read my friend's stories(witch is much more... explicit) and I still owe you for the help on editing. Besides, it can't be that bad right?
Plus, it's in 1st POV so it seems like a interesting perspective
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You don't need to read it if you don't want (you could even just open the chapter scroll all the way down, or something...). But I like first person, it gives a better sense of the character.
8351744 That's why I do 1st pov
YOu know, this isn't half bad. Not nomraly here for porn but hey, 4/5 :D
8352243
Yay! You described it as adorable before reading it, yesterday. Would that still stand? :P
Well... this was tame compared to what I've read. Anyways, here's a like.
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Thanks Sabie~
8352245 Some of the adorableness came from what Reweite was correcting. It's still adorable, but it's lost that layer of charm which came from "This feels like an alien writing a porno to try and fit in with humans" (understand I mean this as a positive quality because that gave the fic a genuinely charming quality). That said, the edited version is pritty sexy in some places, but I liked it even more with the added silly bits ^^
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Would you like it if for the next one I didn't have Rewrite help with the sex parts, but still helping with the rest? And I smiled as I read that, so no offense taken if any was meant (purposefully or accidentally). Though it will be some time before that happens.
8352604 THat could be rather fun!
That last moment really made the story. We see a darker side of Fleur all portrayed in an instant. Nice. Were there tears in Vinyl's eyes because Octavia is cheating on her? Or is Vinyl just really shocked/jealous?
Edit: who am I kidding. Its obviously the former. This needs a continuation.
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Thank you for the feedback. It means more than you may think. ^^
As for the tears... well. Who says it can't be for a different reason? :P