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Razor Flake


Joint account of two brain dead morons

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Jonathan never slept much. This time, he reconsiders his habits. Jonathan was up at night like usual. Then, he hears a thud. When he investigates, he finds a small, purple unicorn, who doesn't know where she is. Soon, Jonathan will be forced to make a decision that will change his life forever.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

This is great! Really curious to see what happens next. Thing is, I noticed multiple grammatical errors. I have good eyes when it comes to reading and things, would you like me to be your editor or something?

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No, it's good. I'm dyslexic, and no matter how many times I go over a story, some slip through. I was actually about to so when I saw your comment. From the bottom of my heart, thanks for reading this. And don't worry. It gets interesting :trixieshiftright:

Ooo, Jonathan has ice powers? Cool! (Pun fully intended) I definitely haven't made up a Fallout character who uses cryogenic weapons and is based on this guy. Totally...

You have no idea how much I wanted to call that chapter Ice and Fire.

You're welcome for the comments! I'm no good at writing stories myself, so I just comment on other people's. :twilightsmile:
This looks interesting. I wonder what Charlotte's magic abilities are.

Great work! I'm curious what Luna will think. And Earth magic seems good for Charlotte. Looking forward to the next one!

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Thanks! I'm actually working on another story at the moment that will be posted here as well. However, instead of slowing down this one, I'll be working on the other one during the others downtime!

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Oh wow....

....It would've worked better in skyrim as a cryomage btw.

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Or if she has any.





It's probably fire though.

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I don't have Skyrim, sadly.
Nor do I have the computer storage to support Skyrim either.

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