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Scout Charger


Yeah, I'm sort of crazy, but most of the time I'm the good sort of crazy, you know, the laughing one, not the other one with satanic rituals and that stuff, that's only on mondays.

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This story is a sequel to Dream Girls


On their last night in Las Pegasus, Scout Charger, Sunset Shimmer and Applejack shared a very special night. But what sounds like a great idea in the evening doesn’t always hold true in the morning. Mistakes have been made and now somebody has to clean up the mess.

Scout has to deal with conflicting emotions and memories. He can’t be certain what happened, why it happened and what it meant. On top of it, the girls he is sure to have slept with don’t seem all too eager to talk about it.

Applejack is caught between a rock and a hard place. She knows she wouldn’t have done it if she didn’t want it, but she also wouldn’t have done it without the alcohol affecting her. Some may call it old fashioned while others call it traditional, but either way, she was raised in the firm believe that this isn’t how a girl should behave.

Sunset however is caught up in a mess she simply doesn’t understand. She has picked up a few of the social norms since she entered this world, but she was still raised in Equestria. Back in the land of magical ponies what she and AJ did wouldn’t be a problem. But in the world of bipedal monkeys it is quite the issue.


Before you (hopefully) start reading this one I'd like to point out that the Sex tag is mainly for the fact that sex is being mentioned. There is no sexy time in this story, if you are here for that I have to disappoint you.

Furthermore, this is a direct sequel to Dream Girls, I therefore highly recommend you read that so you can make heads and tails of this one. If you aren't comfortable with sex I still recommend to read Dream girls, though in this case the last chapter should be enough to help you understand the starting situation of this story.

With that I leave you to the story, have fun. :twilightsmile:

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 10 )

That's just evil and good writing. You clever clever author you. I enjoyed this story.

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thank you very much, I'm happy to hear that you had fun reading this :twilightsmile:

Yea I'm Sunset Shimmer fan. Also I grew up with the original Choose your own adventure books. I hafe expected to see at the bottom of the page:

If Scout picked Sunset Shimmer turn to page 147.

If Scout picked Apple Jack turn to page 57.

Also I'm sick of all the girl to girl shipping. It was nice to read a story where it is actually a guy winning the girl. Also I believe this is first time I've read story with Candenc going through the portal.

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I thought about writing two separate ending actually, but I ultimately decided against it because I figured it would take some of the effect away :raritywink:

8064991
I'd never thought about that, She just was the natural pick for a relationship councilor. I mean who better to ask than the princess of love herself? :rainbowlaugh:

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The last story I saw close to Candenc was one where twilight created a second portal to girl's bathroom in Crystal Prep and Dean Candenc saw her pony version through the portal.

Writing it in a way that leaves the choice up to the reader and never writing either choice was actually best way to do it. I read it kind of confused due to my own mindset, however to the average reader it was perfect effect.

I'm not into the girl Shipping or reading stuff with OCs in them but with yours and Stardust's stories caught me anyways. As a Shimmer fan any story involving crossing the portal or communication through the journal intrest me. Also the reference of Soul Charger from both sides was good. Reference to a character and their pony counter part helps make the charater feel more part of the universe.

I was late coming to this one. But it means I didn't need to wait for it chapter by chapter.

The talking between Sunset and AJ was too shelf the building of drama was good.

That ending though...I don't know if it's cheating or brilliant.

Well done.

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Well, you wouldn't have needed to wait for every chapter. I published them all in one go. The story was complete before I posted it.
I tend to start many fics and drop most of them at one point. Because of this nowadays I usually only post a story when it's complete. Like this none of you guys might be left with a half done story doomed to never be finished. :twilightsmile:

Personally I consider the ending cheating because like this I never have to write which girl was picked and there for don't have to piss of either girls fans. :trollestia:

Awww gotta love big mac

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Glad to hear so, I hope you'll alsoenjoy the rest of the story :twilightsmile:

By the way, welcome to fimfiction, have a great time and I hope you get a good start into the new year

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