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This story is a sequel to The 2016 Presidential Campaign Goes to Equestria
A mishap with a marzipan portal gun leaves Sparkler stuck inside a video game with nothing but a scarf, hoping to survive until she can figure out how to get back home. Along the way, she gets some company, but maybe she's better off without him.
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What happened here?
Less then a hundred views, no comment? How could this be? Derpy Intentionally A Portal Gun is like Admiral Biscuit's magnum opus; it should've been an instant feature and hit!
Well, onto reading it then...
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I was kind of wondering the same thing, especially with a (so far) 100% upvote ratio. Thought that maybe it somehow didn't get published or something.
It (and site) was glitching for me for a couple of days - no upvotes visible, slow loading etc.
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That could be part of it--site was glitching when I uploaded the story, too. Or maybe I just finally went a little bit too far with the "Derpy Accidentally" series and it's time to move on. Maybe next April 1st I'll have to come up with a new idea. Derpy vs. Predator, perhaps.
I lovehate you as always. Amethyst is a hoopy frood, eh?
Mark is a smart man.
You must have been drunk when you wrote this.
Please drink more often.
Masterpiece.
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The funny thing is that I can't take credit for that. That was all pre-readers who are smarter than I am.
Well . . . he was prudent to not mess with Amethyst, at least.
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Strangely, no. I think I might have been sober.
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8077134 Well, please sober-drink more often
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I'll do my best
no desire to be hoist by her own petard. Yesssss! so fine!
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Nice!
haha he shouldn't have said that!
WTH where are all the comments indeed? This just slip by on accident?
Oh well.
Glad to see Amethyst finally got her breakfast!
Keep going! ;)
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Amethyst Star is a total badass.
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No, he shouldn't have.
Especially if he'd read the prequel and knew how little regard Amethyst Star had for human life.
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I think it did, somehow. It's not my most popular franchise by any means, so maybe nobody much actually wanted to read it.
Mark should at least take some comfort in the fact that he wasn't her breakfast.
Get on Sparkler's level, scrub.
(So, did Mark ever respawn?)
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Moral: don't f
k with an angry unicorn. Especially not one that knows about a zillion ways to kill people.
No, Mark did not respawn.
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Sometimes I really wish more of my teammates wouldn't respawn.
Battlefield is a lot more fun when you remember that your deaths are actually more important to your score than your kills.
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It’s probably also a lot more fun when you don’t get strangled by a unicorn’s scarf at the very end, too. Although I dunno, there might be some people who’d like that.
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i seem to remember reading a magazine article about a game where your character would always respawn high in the air and parachute down...
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Was it this game?
Seriously, the last video game I spent any time on was Ratchet and Clank on the PS-2.
oh, i finally found it!
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That’s such a great clip