Well, I'm hooked

Nice to see another new story. Hope to see more of this.

Cool~

Oh yeah, this looks gooooood. Definitely looking forward to more if this. Keep it up!!!

So far its off to a great start. It looks like a simple story unlike your adventure ones, more like your earlier work. This is your third Rarity shipping story and it's not going to be a harem story(2 don't count in my book) with a character you haven't used yet so its a nice change of pace. I am interested with which one David hooks first.

A nice start.

I can tell this story was inspired by The Model's Secretary.

Really, don't understand what make humans different from, say, minotaurs? Why ponies don't have problems with minotaurs or sea serpents but suddenly chose to discriminate humans?
And before anyone bring Zekora case - no one know that she a zebra till Twilight point it out. Ponies fear her because she live in Everfree and no one knew what she do there.

8055841 Could be cultural differences or just plain old fear of the unknown. You don't need much reason to hate someone/something/race/religion/gender/whatever if you already have it in your heart to hate them. It be just to reinforce it.

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No. If they accepting goat, minotaurs, donkeys, sea serpents, gryphons, dragons, changelings (who tried to take over them two times) and who know what else then you need pretty good reasons why ponies suddenly don't accept humans.

I think I may just be able to fap to this.... yes, maybe

seems good so far

8056073 Well yeah, the author needs to explain it in story why the ponies discriminate against humans. At least it is shown that not everyone has a hard on for hating humans.

Rarity is a gem that is quite..... A RARITY *snobbish and sophisticated laughter*

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I don't mean to sound like a dick, but is this fic gonna die too or is it gonna remain in a coma that only gets revived every now and then before going back to sleep?

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Still hoping The Fable of a Zealot is updated soon.

Interesting so far. I'll see where this leads

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I like this, I really like it. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Good start, deffinitely looking forward for more