• Member Since 18th Apr, 2016
  • offline last seen Jun 17th, 2021

AilingStar


Instead of terrible stories, writer created bobcat. Would not ignore again.

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'She' didn't exist. Only 'we'.

So why did that white thing bring up such emotions?


An exercise in minimalism. Just a short, quick, probably terrible oneshot.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

neat, confusing, but neat

Clever! I love the slow transition from a completely neutral, outside view to the emotion of Sweetie Belle. The subtlety of the change was almost lost on me, which is perfect for this kind of story.

Huh? What? ... Oh, wait. I get it!

I'dreally like to pretend I get it.

But I don't. Alien takes over Sweetie Belle, she sees Rarity and is like "yo dude das my sister" and everything is okay.

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