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Mocha Jon


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When King Sombra is resurrected from the dead, he changes plans. The Crystal Empire knows how to defeat him if he shows himself, but how would they defeat their old King if they cannot handle its current Prince? Using Shining Armor as bait, Sombra takes his revenge slowly on the Crystal Empire... and on the Dragon who defeated him before...

Can Twilight save the Empire or will everypony return to being King Sombra's Crystal Slaves?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 16 )

THis story seems interesting. I hope that it updates frequently,. I will put my trust in you that you will update often, by favoriteing this story.

8038297 Expect oart two to orrow or wendsday

this is an interesting read so far I hope to see more soon.

Well this story is getting interesting now and you writing is still proving with each one of your chapters. I will be looking forward to see hoe Sombra will manipulate Shining Armor into twisting him to become like him, and by the looks of it turning him to bad side will not be easy and her certainly doesn't seem to command any respect from his own citizens which is not really conducive to inflating his ego and he is already a push over for both his wife and little sister.

I will be looking forward to see what you will come up with next for this story.

Good luck

This is interesting. I wonder what Sombra is going to do next to shinning. I think it would be funny for Shinning to infect his guards so they turns against mares as well.

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Well sexism really isn't mesnt to be part of the story, but I do like the idea of the guards being possessed as well

Interesting Update. So it isn't just about Shinning being taken over, it is also about the idea of inequality of genders and how those thoughts are plagueing Cadence. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter.

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Honestly it wasn't meant to be a gender inequality issue, I've written about that a lot and I wanted to do a neutral side of it. That's why King Ransy was meant to he competent and so was Queen Dido, I just wanted Cadence to think Shining is meant to be a great captain but might not be cut out for ruling an empire

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Sorry about misinterpreting it then. I'm very happy about this update. I hope that these updates continue to come.

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It will be soon, I already know what's gonna happen, keep an eye out!

Shinning Armor is crazy. I'm laughing at the whole things. Wow. It seems like anything can set him off now. The foals were the best part of this chapter though.

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Thanks! wish I could have been more descriptive in them

This was an interesting chapter and silly, keep it up.

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