A Little Stargazing [Scat]

MPony Star-in Cock [Scat]
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
Starshine finds herself close to Twilights experimental cock, and then a lot closer. the mares have fun together.
Sex
Alt. Universe
Twilight
OC
Septia · 4.9k words · 32 75 · 3.1k views

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Comment posted by Scarce deleted Mar 18th, 2017

Scarce

Scarce #2 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 14 · 2 ·

SilverStarApple

SilverStarApple #3 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 4 · 4 ·

I'm curious... When this story's downvoters saw the story's description, what did they expect? A chance to act like crybullies and get away with it?

Absentia616

Absentia616 #4 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 4 · 1 ·

8030886 It's the ones that don't even read a word of it that get under my skin.

SilverStarApple

SilverStarApple #5 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 2 · 4 ·

8030973 The ones that "Just happen" to arrive in hateful groups? They are annoying, aren't they? It's enough to make you wonder why the staff puts up with them.

I wonder... Does this site give you the ability to turn ratings off?

PegasusMesa

PegasusMesa #6 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 4 · 3 ·

8030973

Read it, thought the writing was horrible. Also gross.

The Dark Bro

The Dark Bro #7 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 4 · ·

Well, erm... everyone has their kinks, I guess?...

I'm just gonna back away now, slowly...

*door slams and panicked screaming and running can be heard*

Reykan

Reykan #8 · Mar 18th, 2017 · · ·

I'm seriously reading these just to find out how many words for poop you use it's great. Also, while not a fan of scat, at least in the realm of coprophagia(I think that's the word) body exploration is always great. Actually it left me a little disappointed that we didn't get a run down of the full tour. Non-fatal full tour is one of my fav's and it's more plausible with magic.

"Bowel nougat" was my favorite, btw. Cracked me up.

Absentia616

Absentia616 #9 · Mar 18th, 2017 · · 1 ·

8030987 I don't think so, but I know of at least one writer who would rather get a down vote then no vote at all
8031025 Well at least you read it, but like what SilverStarApple said what was you expecting, but Septia is a good writer regardless of the content.

ModMCdl

ModMCdl #10 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 1 · 1 ·

For what it's worth... I thought it was written rather well.

Also, hawt.

SilverStarApple

SilverStarApple #11 · Mar 18th, 2017 · 2 · 6 ·

8031775 Normally, yes. But do you want readers to read your story and form an honest opinion of it, or do you want them to see your score and assume it's bad because your score is bad, when in reality, your score is low because the Council Of 20/60 decided your story is "Icky"?

Trust me, turn off the ratings and it'll piss off those whiny pseudointellectual cringers more than anything else on this planet could. Suddenly, they have no power over you, they cannot influence your story's ranking, all they can do is continue their childish temper tantrums in the comments, where they can be reported if they go too far.

For the record, this is not my fetish, I just noticed this story in the New Stories section, and noticed its oddly one-sided like/dislike ratio and the fact that its subject matter is pretty much exactly the kind of thing babies would virtue signal their disgust for.

Septia

Septia #12 · Mar 19th, 2017 · · ·

8031065
That indeed they do, and everyone cannot rightfully enjoy the same things.

8031025
There is still quite a lot of room for me to improve my writing.
The fact that you thought it was gross I cannot help, this is quite niche content after all.

Septia

Septia #13 · Mar 19th, 2017 · · ·

8031138
Hearing this makes me quite happy, and you can probably expect to hear more in the future. A lot more content like this are in my non-pony stories though. Filled with Bowel Nougat.

The commissioner wasn't looking for a close description of the full tour with this story, but I have other works where that is the case, and it is a very fun aspect.

Septia

Septia #14 · Mar 19th, 2017 · 2 · ·

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There doesn't seem to be an option to turn off likes and dislikes. At first I thought it might not be a good idea to do so even if it was possible, however, on the other sites I upload to there is no upvote or downvote option so I might actually prefer that.
Sure, it is annoying that many instantly would dismiss it just by the like/dislike ratio, but it is a niche story from the beginning, so it doesn't matter a lot to me.

8032182
It is worth a lot, Modmcdl, is is worth a lot~.

GhostRider2