Goodbye

It's always hard to say goodbye, and few know this better than those who are burdened with immortality. Discord was always distant from ponies, viewing them as lesser beings at best, and mere toys at worst. Until he met Fluttershy.

He just didn't expect it to be so hard to say goodbye.

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Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #1 · Jan 27th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Well done. Definitely got my eyes watering.

Relagen

Relagen #2 · Jan 27th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Feels like one of those one-offs from PonyThunder I enjoy so much, with the slight difference being his choice to avoid dialogue as much as possible while you used dialogue more freely.

If I was more of a fan of Fluttershy, this one might have made me cry. As it stands, I just feel like one of their friends who never even met Fluttershy but still aches for them and the grief they feel.

The Bricklayer