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Discord seems to be getting ready for a wedding. Twilight has some questions.

The original version of this story won 1st place in the 180th Writeoff contest, "Confronting the Inevitable."

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Right in the feels :fluttershyouch:

Great fic :heart:

Well done! A much different story that what I that it was going to be at the start. Very sweet!

Somehow. I just knew that this would wind its way back to that Fluttershy was dead, and that this whole thing was Discord trying, and failing, to cope with it. With marriage.

And that Twilight was having none of it. Tags kinda gave part of it away. Still a good read at least.

I don't know what I was expecting, but this wasn't it. Very nicely executed.

A very beautiful one-shot.

I also didn’t know what to expect, but this was good. And as far as outcomes when Discord loses Fluttershy, which people must have been dreading for years, this is probably the best outcome. Sad for both of them.

Unique.

It's really hard for an immortal (and really really hard for a Discord) to have to face the loss of a mortal friend.

This was great. Not often we see such a interesting take on the immortal concept. Loved it! :pinkiehappy:

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As much as the tags spoil it, your comment sitting just under the fic without any spoiler'd text is worse.

This really does get ya to the core of your heart, what with this whole fic being super rich in emotion! It's very well written, a nice fic to think about for a long while, and is pretty much a fantastic read! I hope ya didn't mind, but I simply had to read this emotional fic of yours!

Audio Linkyloo!: https://youtu.be/W8Rpk1dd1mQ

(I don't mean to offend anyone with this comment in any way!)

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Thanks, folks!

Since the prompt for this round of the Writeoff was "Confronting the Inevitable," I wanted to see if I could find a slightly new approach to one of the semi-inevitable situations the show sets up. Glad folks are enjoying it!

Mike

Now that is some discord accurate mourning. :(

That was remarkably reserved for Discord. She really did have a positive effect on him.

And that's why one needs to read the tags.
Got quite blindsided by this.

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Yea...far out. I just saw "Twilight," "Discord," "Wedding" and thought "oh some pre-flutterwedding hijinks!"

But no. And I think it's better that way. That makes the punch in the gut even stronger.

This was both adorable, lovely and absolutely heart-breaking.
I love it.

If only they had just not made The Last Problem and left the question of Twilight's alleged immortality alone.

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Thanks, folks!

I actually have a partial outline I put together five or six years ago for a story where the rest of the Mane Six become alicorns, now that I think about... :scootangel:

Mike

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Tthat's an even worse thing Hasbro could've done though. I'd give Equestria 3 days before it's ruins if all the Mane 6 were alicorns.

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If I'm remembering right:

The others become alicorns while the whole group is traveling through various dimensions trying to stop a vast cosmic horror--it was going to be a continuation of this story here and get fairly epic in scale. Probably just as well I'll never get around to it. :twilightsheepish:

Mike

I expected funnies. Not feels.

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