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The opposite was promised to her, but she still stayed young while her friends got older and older. Twilight Sparkle worst fears had come true, and she would indeed outlive her friends. But life had to go on, and Princess Twilight Sparkle overcome her fear and married the most elegant unicorn in the world, and the love of her life. Rarity Belle.

Now, some hundred years after Rarity's death, Twilight is still grieving. The alabaster unicorn had promised to always be with her and Twilight believed her...

But there was something fishy about her death. Something that... didn't quite match. Something she never got the explanation for back then. However, the truth is far more worse than anypony could expect. Because sometimes, love survives even death itself, and love makes us do really, really stupid things.

Rated teen for cussing and the blood, oh sweet Celestia, the blood!


The first chapters are edited by DerpiusHoovicus2., who did a wonderful job and made huge improvements on the story.

And yes, this is indeed inspired by/a tribute to/ripping off Monochromatic, whose story "injuring eternity" made a huge impact. please notice me senpai...

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 79 )

This could get interesting!

make me wonder if Rairty was always a vampire, if sweetie bella is a vampire,
but most of all how will twilight and sunset react.....

8038710 it will be revealed in due time, probably around chapter five.

Why isn't there a gore tag?

I love this so far. Please continue and update soon. Speaking of which when is the next one?

Sunset as the new Princess of the Sun?

Twilight as the new Princess of the Night?

....PERFECT!!!:pinkiehappy:

8039050 I figured it wasn't that much Gore for that tag to be necesarry.
8039690 It's actually already written, I just want chapter three to be Done first. Somewhere around friday, I hope.
8039784 Thanks. :pinkiehappy:

8040040 awesome thanks for letting me know

great and interesting begin for (i hope) a very long story

follow, thump up and track

i hope you didn't disappointing me

you think rarity would send a letter to twilight state I knew where the body of your wife is, come alone.......

this will end badly

me think sunset going to try to keep rarity for meeting twilight cause of the whole vampire thing

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No, sorry..., to give you a more serious answer... there is a lot written, and chapter four is more or less done. It's stuck in a place where I stare at my computer and decides that it's more fun eating ice cream but just because you asked, I will look over it this week. And if it's decent, I'll publish it.

Found this story today and started reading it. Lots of potential! And a good story to boot!

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Hey, thanks! I will double my efforts to finish it then.

8850795
Always good to hear. Read all you wrote in only a hour and a half. Then read Of Colors and Ponys after that thinking they might be linked.

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Oh, that was fast! Well, they are spiritual sisters at least. :)

looking forward to the next chapter and nice work on the first 5

8854393
Thanks! Next chapter is in the works now.

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When can we expect the next chapter

9009794
Unfortunately I'm not sure. I hit a bit of a writer's block with the next chapter.

9010555
Ok. Hopefully you can get through the block soon. But it's understandable if it takes longer than expected

nice work and look out when you do what you said at the end ok some fans target those who don't update a lot I warned others already so please keep that in mind and again nice work:twilightsmile:

IT LIVES! (Thank goodness) I was REALLY hoping for Twilight to recognize her. But considering how many years it's been, it's not that surprising. 😂

I had to go back and reread a bit, but damn that is a good chapter! Moar!

And then they were gone. Rarity followed their exit, there was two stairs in the ballroom that led up to a small etage. That seemed to Rarity as the perfect place to start, to get a good view and expose herself.

Oh, never heard of one of those. Must be like a stage, only fancier, and misspelled.

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Well, aren't you glad you've learned a new thing then? :)

Well, shows me not to count you out. Time to reread one of the better stories I've seen.

That was pretty great. It finally got updated. 20 days before I graduate high school. Thanks for the early graduation gift. Lol.

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Wow. Thanks! ...I'd better try to finish the next chapter in 19 then.

9612557
Lol. That’d be great. I just counted the days today. 22 days till graduation but 16 school days until graduation.

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was wondering why you didnt continue the yearly trend of one chapter every april hehe...but then again with things they way they are your not the only one having things get delayed.

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I am a bit stuck on this part, I am not sure how I thought it was going to work. Because at the moment, it doesn't. It requires a bit to much of the idiot ball on one or two charachters and I don't like that.

That and writers block in general, nothing wants to come out.

But I haven't given up.

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if handing htem the idiot ball is out, and useing its temporary version the idiot stick is also out, then you might have to rewrite the whole story cause you've 'writen yourself into a corner' as the pros say which means you need to go back find out what twist, or choice lead you to where you are and rethink it to take you to a beter point for what your trying to do.

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I will probably need to do some.changes to the latest chapter at least.

Nice and nothing wrong with a once a year deal "Sharing the Night" was like that.

It lives! Which is good joke about a Vampire Rarity...

"No. There is nothing spooky about this. Stakes through bodies was sometimes used to keep bad spirits at bay. Only superstition. Only superstition," she murmured under her breath. And then, with determination, her magic reached for the stake... and pulled it out from the body. She closed her eyes. Nothing happened. Everything was silent. Tee noticd she had been holding her breath. She smiled an uneasy smile. Such a filly she had been, letting her imagination run wild with her. It was nothing, a bit weird, but hey. Weird was not the same as dangerous. Just superstition!

I like your comedy :pinkiecrazy:

The Mistress eyes glew red. “You heard nothing, Thrall. NOTHING!”

Nothing intelligible, at least. :ajbemused:

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Thanks! I'm glad when someone notice it. Not many do.

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