A great tragedy happened in Appleoosa more than a decade ago, one that left half of the element bearers dead, and left the town abandoned. The incident has been left uninvestigated, until now.
Applebloom, third bearer of the element of honesty after her sister Applejack and brother Big MacIntosh, goes to Appleoosa to investigate the town, looking for information that will lead to the solution to the mystery of why her sister died there.
While she's on her own, she has tools with her to help her: a camera that takes animated pictures, and a crystal to record what she says. What will she discover about her big sister and her cousin? Will she want to remember what she learns?
Chapters (12)
AWESOME STORY SO FAR!!! Sorry about your cousin, Braden. I think he would be so happy that you're writing (typing in this case) a story based off him.
I'm guessing this is part of the last update. When I copied the text here from an OpenOffice document file, I found that words that I'd had italicized in that OpenOffice document were automatically italicized in the chapter as well. And, I don't know if this has always been the case; but I also found a sub-chapter heading format with this copying.
This automatic formatting will certainly save me time when I proofread the chapters I add to my stories. And, I may decide to use the sub-chapter heading format in chapters I've already published.
Diggety!
Having said that, it's my observation that it's about here that the popularity of my worst-case-scenario stories starts dropping off. And, that's perfectly fine. As I've written before, I understand that not everyone's going to be enamored with all of my stories; but, not everyone's going to hate all of them either. You, the reader, have the right to your opinion. Please feel free to let me know what you like or dislike about any of my stories.
Can't wait for more!!!
It's getting goooooood!
Ok the accent is a bit much. The murder mystery is fun however. Who done it
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For this story, I thought I'd have the mystery be "how" and "why." I'm glad you enjoy it. All that's left is the conclusion, and for once Applebloom's accent won't be playing a major role since, for the most part, it won't be from her perspective.
That was an excellent story! Good job!