• Member Since 6th Mar, 2017
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Brock Lesnar


Small time writer. Im off and on alot. sorry!

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Discord breaks free of his stone prison, and decides to show the Mane 6 just what his prison was like. And give them a taste of what he went through!



There will be more if this story does good.

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The story concept was interesting, but the story feels rushed and all over the place. I feel it should've been longer, and also, the ending just seems...off. It doesn't feel quite right.

8006190 thanks I'm working on a sequel right now, but I'll rewrite this later. Thanks.

Before I read this, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

p.s. Or is it only what I think it is ?

8007685 oh it's nothing bad. It's there because discord get's mad. So it's not gory or anything.

8007729 So the Dark tag is jest there because Discord makes statues !?

8007744 hehe well it seemed a little dark to me.:twilightblush:

How could the so-called 'good guys' get away with this? He wasn't evil, unlike Nightmare Moon. He just wanted some fun.

Bullsh*t.

His definition of "fun" is making others suffer. So yeah, bullsh*t.

8007832 yep he's messed up in the head.

8007767 A bit, but not to bad

8007857 yep anyway how did you like it?

8007867 it wasn't Dark.
At all !

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Discord breaks free of his stone prison, and decides to show the Mane 6 just what his prison was like. And give them a taste of what he went thru!


There will be more if this story does good.

8016694 fun fact: i was drunk while doing this.

8016707

That explains a lot!

8016818 And I regret nothing!!!:derpytongue2:

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