• Published 18th Feb 2017
  • 898 Views, 35 Comments

Pony Scream - TwinSwords79



A masked serial killer is on the loose in the town of Ponyville!

Comments ( 9 )

Great ending, can't wait for the sequel

8268080
by the way, do you aceept OCs?

8268100
I can give it a shot, I could always use more characters

8268142
Great! Then I have the perfect OC. Her name is Crimson Sparkle and she's the half sister to Twilight Sparkle. She wanted to get revenge on Twilight for what her mother did to Crimson Before Twilight was even born. But Deep down, Crimson wanted to be loved by her family. She is struggling if she wanted to kill Twilight or not.

9691611
Ok you have different killers but almost every scene in this story is ripped from scream 1 rainbow dash and applejacks motives are basically the same as billys and stews motive and you even took some of the same lines from scream 1 and those lines somdtimes dont make any sense!

9692834
Look this was my first story ever...

It’s not my fault i was full of unoriginalality at the time... T_T

9693087
Ok ill give you that but this was the only story i could find with ghostface and it kind of sucks that its just scream 1 again

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